For me, it started as a 9. Darkest intro over.
It then dropped a couple of points as I never cared for Peanut Brittle. But the attention to detail, complete with Valley Speak voice, had me rolling.
Rolling with it, it won me over to become a 10...
...Oh, then the pacing took some amphetamines and washed those down with a jaegerbomb. As much as the story and characters were winning me over big-time, the final 8 minutes' pacing just about shattered the whole thing.
Which is a shame, since the double double-cross was a great idea, largely well-handled with the freshness of the bird species, whose name also lent to a chuckle-inducing joke.
The prison for diabolically deranged AIs at the end had me rolling.
Also, here's some Valleyspeak exemplified - you can always count on someone in the
Q Continuum, I mean the Zappa family, to do some quality entertainment:
Forgot to add the most important part: Ultimately, it's a 6 out of 10 because the pacing goes off the rails - everything else was pretty solid, even the bird doo-doo joke (I'll admit to laughing more times than I should... )
Are the intercouse scenes meant to be icky? Because otherwise they just challenge some people’s preconceptions. The universe of Star Trek is filled with both humanoids and non-humanoids. There will be pairings between consenting adults of wildly different species.
There have been examples in Trek:
Crusher and the Anaphasic lifeform.
Odo and Kira.
Craft rummaging through Zara’s innards.
The Doctor and anyone.
V’ger and Decker.
LDS has the potential to branch out from regular Furries into strange new worlds.
^^this
The scene almost wants to invoke fans' remembering Data and Yar, but it's impossible to do because it's a bird and a floating dues-ex maguffin-that's shaped like D&D dice. But I think you nailed it best in terms of raw body count (no pun intended). The heck is wrong with a bird-creature* (instead of a human) going at it with "the nozzle"? Live-action Trek has shown far more already; this scene was a nonstarter. And it's a cartoon that manages to balance clever ideas while not taking itself too seriously, while often having a good message -- a pretty awesome feat that continues to impress.
* a non-humanoid, which is refreshing to see to begin with, since Mr Anaphasic, Odo, EMH, Ilia, and the rest, all took human form. This LD episode is arguably a first as no humans were directly involved in finding the proverbial "on" switch.