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Re-write Jonathan Archer

Hmmm. I will have to think about this one for a while. No I will not. ANIS. At times the writers make Archer so stupid. You don't climb the ranks by being stupid but they make him do things like take the dog down to the planet of beings that are so easily insulted. The entire episode is founded on that stupid move. In general, he is a doggie dope. You know those owners that put the dog first and coherant thought second. It's fine to give him a pet and make him a dog lover, but I hate that they had him rushing into things with the dog leading the way.

That would be my change in rewriting Archer. When exploring new worlds take the science officer and leave the dog on the ship.
 
(fyi: there isn't even a cut scene where Archer considers the question. But is there is a (cut) scene where Malcolm walks his lady friend to the airlock ...;)

oooooh I'd be interested in that one for sure!
 
Terra Nova: They were instructed to check on the colony. The Novans (who appeared to me to be adults) didn't want help. Archer had to talk them into accepting it (as Trip had to talk the cogenitor into learning to read).
The Andorian Incident: T'Pol remarks that the monk they they meet is behaving oddly; the entry is a mess. Does Archer mind his own business despite having just been invited to leave? No. He strolls around the room and spots a blue skinned alien's reflection in a shiny bowl. Signals Trip and they both try to tackle the guy. That's when the guns are drawn.
Dear Doctor: Archer and Phlox end up leaving the Valakians with a palliative. Not the cure they had asked for.
Desert Crossing: No, in spite of the misrepresentation, Archer doesn't have doubts about Zobral. In fact, after Zobral leaves, Archer sadly admits he believes his cause is just.
Marauders: T'Pol approves and that makes Archer right? T'Pol should have reminded him that these are Klingons. They live for battle. And any day is a good day to die. And the miners didn't "change their minds." Archer had to talk their leader into it. If this ridiculous episode had played out with the Klingons behaving like Klingons (and needing or not needing deuterium wouldn't have been the only issue for them; they were beaten by a bunch of weaklings! No semi-self-respecting Klingon would have allowed that to stand) ... Did anybody on the miners/Enterprise side even get hurt? This plot worked well for Yul Brynner and Steve McQueen, but here the writing was so convenient, it became preposterous!
Lemme get off this merry-go-round, I'm dizzy! :cardie: My point wasn't to disagree about our interpretation of the premises.

If I understand your analysis, you're pointing out that Archer has a history of 1) offering help when none is asked for and 2) refusing help when it is requested.

This is the basis for your suggestion that Archer "offer help when none is asked for," i.e., discuss Earth's history of sexual inequality and its later attitude change with the Vissians, and encourage Charles to take up the fight for equality; and your position that Trip's actions are simply Trip emulating Archer, also by "offering help when none is asked for," because the cogenitor falls in the weak/helpless category. And also the basis for your position that Archer is hypocritical for "refusing help when it is requested," i.e., turning down the cogenitor's request for asylum.

Fine. What confuses me is that your analysis suggests that Archer is poorly written in these example episodes.

If Archer were written consistently and well throughout the series, then there would (hopefully) be no hypocritical situations down the road in which Trip emulates his captain by doing X, and Archer dresses him down for it. Emulating the captain would be a good thing.

Or, perhaps Archer did something (well-intentioned but perhaps not fully thought out) in Season 1 that ended up being a mistake (Fight or Flight is a good example), and he learned from it. Then, late in Season 2, no one on the writing staff would be having a character emulate the captain's early stumbles and characterize them as admirable. Ideally, you would see the learning curve established, so Archer would be in a position to say, "Perhaps I would have done that in the past, but no longer. I know better now."

One thing that seems to have been needed was consistency and credibility regarding Archer's decisions. These episodes worked for some viewers better than for others, so maybe the writers were on the right track, but they didn't quite get what they intended onto the page. Perhaps tweaking the circumstances, characters, motivations...something to have Archer's actions elicit more of a :techman: response from the viewers instead of a :wtf:

I'm not suggesting that the Vissian captain should have been forced to listen with a phaser to his head. But Archer spent three solid days in a stratopod with this guy and now all of a sudden he would be imposing human values if he tries to explain where Trip was coming from when he did this? Archer doesn't have to sanction Trip's actions to share our values. This is who we are. What the heck is wrong with telling them that?
Keeping in mind that, structurally, Archer represented "non-interference" and "establishing positive relations," and Trip represented "interference" in this episode. If Archer significantly switched sides, the theme might have gotten muddled. There was the "asylum" scene between Archer and the Vissians, in which Archer ran into a brick wall of cultural incomprehension pretty quickly when he tried to explain the human perspective. If there were another scene in which Trip tried to smooth things over and apologize, in order to win asylum for Charles, and the Vissians reacted in a total :wtf: way, that would have illustrated the cultural chasm. My guess is that the writers probably thought they covered that in the asylum scene. Aaaaand we're not talking about Archer anymore, sorry. :lol:

Oh, please don't be silly. Charles would have kill itself half-way through the speech!
:guffaw:

Does he take responsibility? In the final analysis, not really.
Do we see his compassion? Well, he does look like he feels kind of bad when he enters Trip's quarters to give Charles the bad news. But at the end, when we really should be seeing compassion, sadness. Not so much.
I guess I'm with bluedana on this one...Archer is one of those people who typically hides his deeper feelings, such as disappointment or sadness, behind a facade of stoniness or anger. He shows his compassion to Charles, who needs to see it, but he's all Toughlove to Trip, because he's disappointed.

The script excerpt is great, thank you! And very telling, describing Archer's "barely controlled anger" and "anger rising."

Yeah, but my intent was to see how people would prefer to have seen Archer characterized by the writers. :)
It really is a compelling and complex question, since Archer works just fine for many people and doesn't need "fixing," while other people despise him. You can pick out individual episodes that are on best-of and worst-of lists.

If the writing staff had had a grand 7-year plan, I think there would have been more character consistency overall. Archer's father died at two different times, c'mon. If there had been a specific arc mapped out for him to overcome his prejudice, learn from his mistakes, mature because of war and loss and the weight of increasing responsibilities and the call of destiny, all the while struggling to maintain his gee-whiz love of exploring, combat his tendency toward self-sacrifice, and retain his humanity and compassion...wow, a captain for the ages. :)
 
Jinx:
T:
You're not responsible.
A: Dismissed.
T (imploring): Captain...
Archer turns back to the window, A long painful beat, Trip turns and exits.
Off Archer... fade out.
[Commie edit: Staring into space out his porthole, his face long and full of disappointment.]

Thanks, Jinx. I think this proves Archer did indeed take some personal responsibility for his actions. Why else would Trip say, "You're not responsible." Trip knows Archer is already traveling down that path.

I think Blue is exactly right - Archer gets angry, but with some easy deduction we see he's usually mad at himself; he yells at others. Just like in Shockwave, Archer yells at people, he's really mad at himself and taking the death of the people on the planet personally.

Maybe the question all along has been -- do you (not you specifically, Jinx, but people) not like that when angry he takes it out on multiple people, including the hardest on himself?
 
You've got to be kidding me. :wtf: How does any of that show Archer was taking any amount of responsibility for what happened? The commend about himself was just one more verbal bitch-slap for Trip. There is nothing there to show that Archer was anything other than his normal arrogant self.
 
As for him being PO'ed at the Vulcans, wasn't it that the Vulcans used their clout to convince the United Earth government to not finance Doctor Archer's experiments? I figured THAT was why he was mad at them, not because they wouldn't give technical aid but actually used their influence to not even let Henry use all the resources he otherwise would have had.
 
I don't know, I always felt like he was whining because the Vulcans wouldn't just give him the tech, though at times it was more focused on them simply continually delaying the program, so he whined because his dad didn't live long enough to finish the engine (I guess). I alwasy felt they should've given him a stronger motivation for disliking the Vulcans, like maybe they were somehow involved in an accident that killed his father or something - nothing malicious but still enough to make him hold them responsible.
 
If I spent so many valuable years of my life working on tech that a more advanced (and peaceful) race could easily share, I'd be pissed off too. I sympathize with the Archers.
 
It's more that the Vulcans actively sought out to prevent Henry from completing his work and near-sabotaged his efforts until he died.
 
It's more that the Vulcans actively sought out to prevent Henry from completing his work and near-sabotaged his efforts until he died.

The hell they did. Henry was a mad old kook and they wouldn't let him cheat.

Besides, it still took them another 30 years to launch enterprise after henry's death is we can go by the timeline supplied in Cold Station 12. No human was smart enough to get crack warp two till trip started jiggering with Henry's plans.

Besides it was about... Wat if the French decided to give unlimited bus passes to all the KKK members in America? It's always been a question about allowing idiot thinking to be contained by geography... or stellar cartography. The events of WWIII were still weighing heavily on the Vulcan's minds god forbid the Eugenics war before that, this sort of garbage shouldn't be exported to more impressionable innocent cultures that might get carried away with a bad idea.

Now on the other hand, lets just be fearful about the customs and habits that the humans might have brought home that might have eclipsed human culture?
 
Cogenitor has always struck me as that classic Trek "impossible dilemma" story, where there are two compelling sides of a thorny issue, each with powerful arguments to back them up, and no "right" choice that will make everybody happy in the end. It's like the Kobayashi Maru--it's a test of character. Will the newly-enlightened Charles figure out how to be content within the strict confines of a cogenitor's existence? (Sadly, no, so this story is a tragedy.) Will Trip have the strength of character to take responsibility for his well-intentioned but impulsive actions, which contributed to the tragedy? Will Archer, who is a man of compassion but also a commander, stay true to Starfleet's nascent policy of non-interference with alien species, or will he lead with his heart when this "incident" with his best friend and the cogenitor is presented to him? I love stories that put characters in crisis and compel them to reveal parts of their deeper selves.

Cogenitor was one of my favorite episodes and one of the best of Enterprise. The fact that the question raised here is a difficult one is a major strength. It's a very difficult issue to deal with. The cogenitor is a living being who should have the same rights as everyone else. At the same time, the cogenitor is the only means of reproduction for the Vissians. They make up 3% of the population so they really can't afford for them not to be doing what they're capable of.

Unlike many episodes, the alien race (The Vissians) are portrayed in a sympathetic light. The captain of the ship comes across as a pretty good guy and the Vissian couple aren't bad either. They aren't treating the cogenitor cruelly here.

Desert Crossing: No, in spite of the misrepresentation, Archer doesn't have doubts about Zobral. In fact, after Zobral leaves, Archer sadly admits he believes his cause is just.

What annoyed me in this episode is that we never got the POV of the other side. Maybe they were right about Zobral. Archer simply assumes that they're wrong without getting information from the other side.
 
Archer, angriest captain ever, can't go 5 episodes without being beaten up
 
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Archer, angriest captain ever, can't go episodes without being beaten up

Thats one thing that bothered me; he was angry alot but what is with all the beating up. Was he trying to see if he could beat Trip to most stops in Sick Bay?
 
Archer, angriest captain ever, can't go episodes without being beaten up

Thats one thing that bothered me; he was angry alot but what is with all the beating up. Was he trying to see if he could beat Trip to most stops in Sick Bay?

I thought Mayweather made most trips to sick bay, he was always injured.
 
Archer, angriest captain ever, can't go episodes without being beaten up

Thats one thing that bothered me; he was angry alot but what is with all the beating up. Was he trying to see if he could beat Trip to most stops in Sick Bay?

I thought Mayweather made most trips to sick bay, he was always injured.

Really I know of a couple of times he made it to sick bay but I think frequent visitors were between Trip and Archer.
 
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