Unfortunately, I think the author couldn't contradict canonical events. For instance, she had Janeway promote Harry as the soonest possible moment, possibly mere minutes after the series ended. But she couldn't do it sooner.
I can both understand and respect that.
It would be both confusing and stupid if an author wrote a book in which, let's say kathryn janeway decided to leave Starfleet and settle down on her aunt's ostrich farm in Colorado while she would show up in the next episode of the show or still be Captain on Voyager in the next book, written by some other author.
As I see it, it would have been impossible to make Kim a Lieutenant in a book when the series was still running. But I see no problem for some author to make him Lieutenant in a book now.
The same when it comes to Kes. It's actually possible to write around the events in
that episode by simply regarding the monster in it as something from a mirror universe. By doing so, the events in the episode itself aren't denied or simply wiped out (even if I wish that the epsode would be wiped out from all future airings and DVD productions) but turned around to something better.
I don't want to gloat about myself since I'm not a professional writer. But I often try to write around certain issues I don't like, such as the events in that episode, Lieutenant Carey's death, the death of Gowron and Neelix being stranded on that horrible asteroid.
My biggest problem is Admiral Janeway. I think that she fits in better as Captain of Voyager so Imust find a solution to that. Simply demote her but how?
That Gowron thing never sat will with me. Don't know whether it was the political stupidity, the Oedipus-like irony (no mothers involved, but rather causing something to happen by trying to prevent it, both Oedipus and his parents did this), or the fact that Worf just "installed" Martok as Chancellor. So yes, I'll go along with that.
Maybe I'm weird but I like Gowron. He reminds me in looks amd manners about a person who lived in my neighborhood when I wasa kid, a nice but somewaht odd person to say the least.
And aslo as a Star Thek character. In a way, I found him better as Chancellor for the Klingon Empire than Martok, who I also like. But he was better as Admiral, co-operating with the federation. Gowropn was a bit more unpredictable. Not to mention those eyes!
But sometimes I have an odd taste when it comes to favorites in series, especially in Star Trek which the picture below shows. My aces in the Star Trek game!
If he was in Picard, a relatively serious show, he would certainly hold a higher rank. If he was in Prodigy, it's pretty good about taking the characters seriously, so he'd probably be promoted there too. But LD likes playing with running gags, and Harry's eternal ensignhood (as mean-spirited as it was) fits that completely.
The sad thing is that Star Trek is so split up now. many different series which have a certain amount of fans but nothing which holds it together. Picard could have been great but was too dystopic for me and it also looks like an attempt to show up the TNG characters for the last time, sort of "Farewell Tour" for a legendary rock band.
The other series are............well, nice in a way but can't be compared to what we had in TOS, TNG, DS9 and VOY.
I would really like to see a new series with new characters in the 24th cientury, made in the same spirit and with the same type of stories we saw in TOS, TNG, DS9 and VOY. No dystopic scenarios, political correctness or destruction of important worlds or other screw-ups of established Star Trek facts and things.
In short, something which would bring Star Trek back to life again worldwide.