looked like the moon at the start was revolving around something other than the centre of the planet.
Damn! You're right! I'll need to fix that, thanks.

but yeah, the planet should at least be on the plane of the moon's orbit.
looked like the moon at the start was revolving around something other than the centre of the planet.
Damn! You're right! I'll need to fix that, thanks.
Why not just change how you refer to the star? Something like "Our star" or "the star we orbit"? Even though "sun" is supposed to be generic, common usage has most people thinking sun=Sol. "The moon" has a similar problem.I think a big part of this is that I start the narration with "Our Sun." The solution is to name the planet, something I've been resistant to until now.
I'm Scottish, I'll have a bash at the dialogue and send you a link to it.
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