I get what they're going for, but I admit that by the end of the sequence I'm feeling a bit restless. Moreso with the Vejur flyby, which is Our Heroes staring at the viewscreen...it's all fascinating, but it also goes on for what feels like a very long time.
That said, as I'll always say with TMP, the Enterprise flyby, at least, very much benefits from being seen in the theater on a large screen, versus being shown on a standard living room size screen while one is being distracted by who-knows-what.