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The TNG Relaunch - My version

BrotherBenny

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My overall disappointment with the TNGR has led me to one inescapable conclusion, I think I can do better.

So I will try. I am continuing my work on the three series I have running at the moment. The Dauntless series in the United Trek group is still on-going. The Star Trek: 500 story will continue, and at the moment Stargate: First Contact is a one-off fusion experiment.

As you have probably become aware by reading my stories, I tend to have convoluted plots and story arcs, since I favour that approach. My version of the TNGR will continue that trend. Since I have only just decided to work on that, I only have the basics in mind.

While Captain Riker's solution to the Reman situation was a good ending to his first mission, I felt that there could have been more done with the Romulans. I was not too keen on Doctor Crusher's mission to Kevratas and the subsequent relationship development with Picard, so I will create a workaround for that as well.

Initially, as the Enterprise is being put back together from the battle with Shinzon, I will have the senior crew reevaluate their lives and their places in Starfleet. Doctor Crusher is still the head of Starfleet Medical, but a different crisis will bring her and Picard back together - and their relationship will evolve, since it should have done a long time ago.

If any of you do have ideas that you think might work, then by all means let me know and I will see if they fit in to my vision of the TNGR. Let me reassure you, the Romulan crisis is not over yet.

Watch this space...
 
That's a great idea! And I'm looking forward to your stories. I haven't read the TNGR novels, only the Titan series. I'd opt for less melodrama than in the books, if you include the Titan (overall, I'm content with the series, though).
 
That's a great idea! And I'm looking forward to your stories. I haven't read the TNGR novels, only the Titan series. I'd opt for less melodrama than in the books, if you include the Titan (overall, I'm content with the series, though).
I'm leaving the Titan series well enough alone since I am content with those stories. It is the TNGR books themselves which leave me wishing for something more. I'm using several basic plots and characters from the relaunch but utilising them in my own way. I may have something posted on this soon.
 
How about some of the Voyager crew on board Captain Picard's Enterprise. Maybe Tom Paris as 1st or 2nd Officer, Harry Kim as LT Cmdr in Data's position, and Seven of Nine at conn.
 
How about some of the Voyager crew on board Captain Picard's Enterprise. Maybe Tom Paris as 1st or 2nd Officer, Harry Kim as LT Cmdr in Data's position, and Seven of Nine at conn.
With all due respect, alicelouise, wouldn't that make it a Voyager story?

I'm keeping the same characters introduced in Resistance. Lieutenants Nave and Battaglia, Lt Commander Kadohata and Counsellor T'Lana. Leybenzon can have a one way trip out an airlock.

I should be able to have a teaser posted by the end of the week, at which point I will also be working on my other two stories.
 
I'm looking forward to seeing your ideas myself. I wasn't too pleased with the TNGR either. I liked Resistance, even though I though Nave was something of a Mary Sue. I haven't finished reading DIW, and I didn't like the Q or Borg books.

I don't like Kadohata and Leybenzon. But T'Lana's cool, though it's pretty obvious she and Worf are going to get together.

Some things I would like to see....
1) Keep the Picard-Crusher relationship
2) Make Martin Madden the XO. Kill himself later if you want.
3) Breaking up the band....I liked the idea of Capt. LaForge from VOY's "Timeless". I would move him in that direction.
4) I probably would've put Worf on Titan as XO, but since you don't want to mess with the Titan series, I'm not sure what I would do with him.
5) Really give us some different, unique characters for the Counselor, Ops Officer, Helmsman role. I thought Leybenzon was pretty boring and Kadohata was annoying. I would like to see some more alien characters onboard.
6) No Borg stories...for a while at least.
7) Bringing back the "Conspiracy" aliens, ignoring the DS9R.
8) Would like to see Wesley's reaction to the Picard-Crusher relationship
9) Doing something different with Alexander. Perhaps a Starfleet career.

These are just some crazy thoughts. You don't have to do anything with them at all.
 
1) Keep the Picard-Crusher relationship
Done, I want that in too.

2) Make Martin Madden the XO. Kill himself later if you want.
An interesting idea, but where is Worf going to go?

3) Breaking up the band....I liked the idea of Capt. LaForge from VOY's "Timeless". I would move him in that direction.
Not quite yet, but you never know.

5) Really give us some different, unique characters for the Counselor, Ops Officer, Helmsman role. I thought Leybenzon was pretty boring and Kadohata was annoying. I would like to see some more alien characters onboard.
No Leybenzon. A different Kadohata. As for more aliens, I'm thinking on it.

6) No Borg stories...for a while at least.
None, period.

7) Bringing back the "Conspiracy" aliens, ignoring the DS9R.
I like what the DS9R did with them. I'm continuing the Romulan storyline.

8) Would like to see Wesley's reaction to the Picard-Crusher relationship
Maybe...some interesting possibilities.

9) Doing something different with Alexander. Perhaps a Starfleet career.
I thought of it, but I'll stick with TLC (TrekLit Canon).
 
Well, here we are folks. The eagerly awaited teaser to my version of the TNGR.

Tentatively titled The Spirit of Apollo, I'm starting in approximately the same place as Death in Winter did.

Enjoy - and please comment.

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Starfleet Medical
San Francisco, Earth
Stardate 56942.6

An exasperated hiss escaped from Chirurgeon Ghee P’Trell as he read the latest reports from across the galaxy again. Most of what required the services of the galaxy’s best doctors was simple and even a cadet could handle most of them. The difficult ones were to be prioritised in order of urgency regardless of culture—like he would do it any other way—and then the assignments would be distributed. Only one stood out from the others and P’Trell knew that his boss would want to handle this one personally. Hence the exasperation at the wait before he could see her. He took to pacing the office in a predatory gait which made the human assistant extremely nervous, though she was doing her level best not to show it. Several moments later, the doors to her office opened and three people walked out, none looking very happy. The female assistant, who was relatively good looking for a human, made a dramatic gesture that P’Trell took to mean that he could enter.

Doctor Beverly Crusher was seated behind her expansive desk staring at the padds in front of her. The walls were adorned with pictures of her son and various Enterprise crewmembers, with her educational trappings and meetings with various dignitaries. Even with all that, she still looked uncomfortable and he realised that he was going to be doing her a favour with this information. She put her thumb print to a number of padds and set them aside, obviously intending to have them removed later. P’Trell stood in front of the desk waiting patiently, though he was itching to get a bite to eat, literally.

‘Stop fidgeting and sit down, Ghee.’

‘I have the latest assignments,’ he replied and gingerly handed over the padd. ‘You might be interested in the fifteenth item on the list.’

Crusher scanned the padd’s contents and nodded in places, accepting his recommendations for the relevant assignments. He noticed her expression when she read the last item on the list, and then the pursing of the lips when she read the identity of the medical officer most suited to that job. ‘Me? What makes you think that I am the most qualified?’

‘Doctor, of all the medical personnel across the entire fleet, you are the one with the most knowledge of Romulan physiology. The Enterprise has had more dealings with the Romulans than any other vessel—more than two dozen to be exact—and as the chief medical officer, you have been at the forefront.’

Crusher sighed. ‘Would you mind telling me about Kevratas or do I have to do the research myself?’

‘Kevratas is almost inside the Romulan neutral zone and one of the worlds trying to gain independence from the Empire since its collapse. There have been reports from eight worlds in a similar situation which have begun to experience the effects of a plague sweeping through the population. From the reports given to us by Starfleet Intelligence, we believe that Kevratas is planet zero.’

‘So we should focus our efforts there? A logical approach. What help are we likely to get from the Romulans?’

‘None,’ P’Trell answered with absolute disdain. ‘The Praetor isn’t lifting a finger to help. The official line is that she doesn’t have enough ships loyal to her to make the difference, but Intelligence has a different theory. They think that this will serve as a message to other worlds considering independence. Of course, there’s always the possibility...’

‘...That the virus was deliberately released on these worlds to teach them a lesson. I thought of that myself.’

‘Are you going to go?’

‘How do you suggest I get out that far?’

‘Well, I’m guessing your former ship is still out of commission?’

Crusher nodded.

‘There’s always the Pasteur.’

‘I was led to believe that she was still undergoing final shakedowns.’

‘She is, but what better way to test her.’

‘I’m not comfortable with taking an untested ship into such a dangerous place.’

P’Trell smiled slightly. ‘Why don’t you get a couple of your former shipmates to go with you? I imagine they’re going a little crazy being cooped up.’

The beginnings of a plan crossed Crusher’s mind. ‘Thank you, Ghee. I think I know just who to take.’

P’Trell waited until he was back in his own office before jumping around in joy and to release the pent up energy. He was now really hungry and decided to go and celebrate. He was aware Crusher knew that he’d been after the job for a few years now, ever since he’d been nominated for the Carrington award, and if he was able to convince her that out there was the best place for her, then he was the next in line. Being the head of Starfleet Medical was the best job in the world for him.




Beverly Crusher turned to face the window of her office which looked out over the city of San Francisco. It was never a glorious sight since the Golden Gate bridge couldn’t be seen from her vantage point, but she enjoyed the skyline she did see. Looking up at the twilight sky, she could just about make out the giant shipyards orbiting above the city where her former starship was still being repaired after its altercation with Shinzon’s Scimitar. The Enterprise had been in drydock for close to seven weeks and according to Geordi it was likely to be another five before she was spaceworthy again. The chief engineer would not like to leave his precious engines but she hoped her offer would entice him to do so temporarily. She was going to be taking command of the Pasteur herself and because she was going into dangerous territory, she wanted someone at her right hand who was capable of making the hard choices when it counted regardless of the consequences, and who had plenty of reason to distrust Romulans and not take their lies at face value. There was only one logical choice.

‘Computer, connect me to Captain Jean-Luc Picard, commanding officer, USS Enterprise, NCC 1701 E, priority transmission.’

‘Working, stand by.’

While she was waiting for the computer to connect her, she added her thumb print to a number of transfer orders and promotions, changed her schedule for the next few days and poured herself a cup of Earl Grey tea, a little habit she picked up after spending so many breakfasts with her former captain and best friend. The Federation logo appeared on the screen, with a line of text underneath indicating that she should wait. She took a sip of her tea and was in the process of returning her cup to the saucer when the logo disappeared, to be replaced by the immediately smiling visage of the Enterprise’s commanding officer.

‘Beverly, how are things at Starfleet Medical?’

‘Not without complications. How are the repairs going?’

‘We’ll be here for another few weeks and many of the crew have taken short-term assignments or asked for permanent transfers.’

Crusher hesitated briefly. ‘I’m afraid I need to pinch a couple of them for a while.’

Picard’s brow furrowed. ‘What’s the problem?’

‘There’s been a plague outbreak on several Romulan border worlds and we’ve been asked to help by someone high up in the chain. Someone who is working against Praetor Tal’Aura.’

‘So it’s not going to be a safe ride,’ he responded knowingly. ‘What is the situation?’

‘Planet zero is a near-frozen Class-M world called Kevratas. Tal’Aura isn’t interested in helping them since they are attempting to cede from the Empire, or what’s left of it. I’m going in there with a full medical steam to find out what is killing those people.’

‘How are you getting out there?’

‘The Pasteur. It’s a medical ship fresh off the production line. But I don’t have full confidence in the shakedowns that Starfleet have given the ship. I want to have someone on board who can help with the engines and know exactly how to fix any problems on the fly.’

‘You want to take Geordi as a temporary chief engineer?’

Crusher nodded.

‘I’m sure he’ll be only too glad to assist. Taurik can take over without any loss in performance. He’s more than capable.’

‘Thank you, Jean-Luc.’

‘I would ask that you take Worf with you. He has plenty of experience with Romulan tactics and should you get into trouble he is the one most likely to be able to assist you.’

‘I was going to ask for his inclusion,’ Crusher replied.

Picard smiled. ‘I have offered him the post of first officer but he has yet to accept.’

‘Jean-Luc, we both know why. You mentioned it to me as a possibility before you even asked him. He believes he failed then and all the good work he’s done as a Federation ambassador will not change that. Worf needs to forgive himself and to do that he needs to put in a similar situation again or be reminded of it.’

‘He will never be put in that situation again,’ Picard replied. ‘It was an unlikely pairing that cannot happen again. I doubt he will let himself get that close to anyone, for precisely that reason.’

Crusher supposed he was right. It was a situation highly unlikely to repeat itself. ‘I need to sort things out here. The Pasteur leaves in three days.’

‘They’ll be there, Beverly. Good luck.’

‘Luck will get us there in one piece. Skill and dedication will do the rest.’

‘All the same, you will be in dangerous territory. Not only from any loyal—or rogue—warbirds, but also from elements within Kevrata society.’

‘I assumed that would be the case which is why I will have a large security detachment on board, all with medical training I might add.’

‘As always you think of everything.’

‘I would still prefer the Enterprise to be there, it would give a few commanders second thoughts.’

Picard smiled and Crusher heard the chime to his ready room. ‘I have to go, but if you need me, I’m only a call away.’
 
That's a great start. Looking forward to reading more of this. So glad you are keeping the Picard/Crusher relationship in your version.
 
That's a great start. Looking forward to reading more of this. So glad you are keeping the Picard/Crusher relationship in your version.
Thanks. I'm writing more.

don't even know what tngr is but this was cool.
TNGR = (Star Trek: ) The Next Generation Relaunch. IE Death in Winter, Resistance, Q&A and Before Dishonour. And thanks. I'm enjoying writing my own version.
 
"He was aware Crusher knew that he’d been after the job for a few years now, ever since he’d been nominated for the Carrington award, and if he was able to convince her that out there was the best place for her, then he was the next in line."

No one ever has other motives do they? Great start, I'm in. How often do you expect to post chapters?
 
Nice start to your TNG Relaunch! I haven't read any of the TNGR books, but I'm familiar with the premise. I think you've got a very promising story-line here - I'm looking forward to how you develop this. :)
 
USS Pasteur
Earth Spacedock
Stardate 56950.8

Lieutenant Commander Geordi La Forge and Commander Worf shared a meaningful glance with one another as they saw the Pasteur for the first time. The ship was reminiscent of the Daedalus-class vessels from the founding of the Federation some two hundred years earlier but La Forge knew that whatever the exterior looked like, the interior was what counted. The Olympic-class ships were state-of-the-art hospital ships, designed to mop up after battles or serve as massive hospitals during a major crisis. His job was to make sure that the ship was ready for whatever might befall it in Romulan space and Worf was along because of his expertise with Romulan tactics. He glanced at his superior and noticed that Worf looked distinctly uncomfortable.

‘Are you alright, Worf?’

‘I do not believe this ship is capable of fighting,’ the Klingon said taciturnly.

‘Did you look at the specifications I sent to your quarters?’ La Forge asked.

‘I glanced at them.’

‘This ship has the same weaponry as an Intrepid-class starship. It can defend itself.’

‘Doctor Crusher is not a fighter.’

La Forge snorted. ‘Don’t you believe it. That’s why you’re here, to make sure that the Romulans don’t succeed in killing millions of their own people.’

‘They are without honour,’ he muttered.

La Forge ignored him. It was his favourite phrase and he trotted it out frequently. ‘She asked for you personally, Worf. You should be honoured.’

He growled. ‘I do not want to be first officer.’

The chief engineer moved to stand in front of the Klingon. ‘Then why are you in that uniform? Why did you resign as ambassador and have your Starfleet status reactivated?’

‘I don’t know.’

La Forge could not have been more shocked if Worf had gutted him with a blade. ‘She’s expecting us.’

‘We should not keep her waiting.’

‘I agree,’ he replied and stepped up to the transporter pad. ‘The transporter has been preset. We’ll be beaming directly to the bridge.’

As they materialised on the right hand side of the bridge, La Forge noticed the difference in layout immediately. The forward section of the bridge had a wraparound conn console and a couple of meters behind that was the captain’s chair ringed by a barrier with several caducei. The rear of the bridge contained four seats and consoles which were not in standard configuration.

‘This is an unusual design,’ Worf commented.

‘The Pasteur is not designed as a ship of the line. It appears to have been streamlined for medical purposes. Those consoles at the rear are probably for research.’

‘We should reconfigure two of them for tactical and engineering.’

‘I agree, but we should speak with the Doctor first. She’s in her ready room.’

Worf nodded and strode forward, pressing the chime for the door. They both heard the clear “come in” from the other side as the door swished opened. As senior officer, Worf entered first, followed by La Forge a single step behind. Crusher was behind a rather small wooden desk which was piled high with padds and a pot of what was clearly Earl Grey tea. La Forge hid a smile but noticed that Worf sniffed the air a little bit.

‘I’m glad you accepted my offer, gentlemen,’ she said, rising from the chair and coming round the desk to greet them.

‘You look comfortable there, Doctor,’ La Forge said, shaking her hand.

Worf bowed his head in acknowledgement.

‘What did you think of the bridge?’

‘A little small isn’t it?’

‘It does the job. The Pasteur is not a ship of the line and not expected to go into combat. This vessel is supposed to mop up afterwards. However, considering that I am about to take this ship into Romulan space, I wanted to be prepared. That’s why you’re here.’

‘There is no tactical station on the bridge,’ Worf said.

‘No, there isn’t, but one of the rear consoles can be reconfigured for that purpose,’ she replied and turned to the engineer. ‘Geordi, Starfleet have assured me that this ship is ready for anything but to be honest I don’t completely trust them. I’m taking a ship full of doctors who’ve never been in direct combat and security officers who have been trained in simulations to a dangerous place. I need this ship to be ready for anything.’

‘I will reconfigure the station on the bridge and take your security officers through their paces, if that is acceptable to you.’

Crusher nodded. ‘I hoped you would.’

‘I’ll run simulations of my own regarding what I know about the Romulans and any spatial anomalies we might come across,’ La Forge added.

Crusher smiled. ‘Do you expect us to fall into rift and end up in a different galaxy?’

‘There’s no way to tell,’ the engineer replied. ‘Regarding Enterprise and Titan, and their respective crews, anything is possible.’

‘I guess that’s true after everything I’ve seen serving on two Enterprises. How long will you need for your simulations?’

‘I can work en route if you’re ready to leave.’

‘As can I,’ Worf agreed. ‘We will be ready by the time we reach Kevratas.’

Crusher nodded. ‘In that case, we’ll get underway. Worf, I would like you to act as my first officer while on board. I expect to be on the surface much of the time and would like an experienced bridge officer to remain up here.’

Worf’s expression soured slightly, which she expected it to do, but he inclined his head in acknowledgement. ‘I accept, Doctor, but I am not sure if I am suitable to the role.’

‘There’s only one way to know that for sure, Worf,’ Crusher replied. ‘And you know that Captain Picard would not have asked you if he did not think that you were capable.’

La Forge could see that Worf was once again struggling with his demons and stepped in. ‘We’d better get going, Doctor.’

‘Yes, I’ll be on the bridge momentarily.’
 
Well, Worf is certainly pleased with his assignment, isn't he? :rolleyes: He better deal with his demons and get his head in the game if they're going up against the Romulans!

Very nice dialog work here. It sounded very natural and appropriate for the characters, particularly between LaForge and Worf.
 
CHAPTER ONE

Praetor’s Audience Chamber
Ki Baratan, ch’Rihan
Stardate 57011.0


According to Terran astronomers, 128-Trianguli was obscured from their world by a faint orange star called Epsilon Phoenicis and it was for this reason that they could not detect the planets in that system. It was not until the twenty-third century that they learned the truth about the life in the 128-Trianguli system, the homeworld of the race they called Romulans. The Rihannsu had left Vulcan centuries before and quickly built up a powerful expansionist empire which was feared by many. They had fought many wars, some lost, but most won, and even the aliens from across the galaxy could not diminish their power. Instead, their power was diminished from within, from a disloyal faction of former slaves. Shinzon of ch’Havran, a failed experiment to destroy their most powerful enemy from within, had gathered enough to his cause, nearly destroyed the empire, and then forsaken what was left for revenge. He had been killed and the empire left in ruins.

Praetor Tal’Aura, wearing the traditional robes of the Imperial Throne, thought of her world’s—her empire’s—history as the marble floor was polished by an uhlan under punishment. She was thinking of having the floor remade if the Klingons were able to take the Havrannsu slaves from her. After all, without them, the military would have to find another way to mine all the metals they needed for their ships. She made a mental note to rebuild Vikr’l prison and turn it into a training camp for miners. The criminals should be useful for something. As she thought of that, the doors to her audience chamber were thrown open and the half-breed entered. She had escaped from the prison during the breakout masterminded by the Havrannsu and Starfleet and had apparently been gathering those loyal to her for a coup. This much was known by Tal’Aura’s delightfully devious proconsul Tomalak, but the praetor wanted to know what the half-breed hoped to achieve.

‘Has your time in captivity completely taken the concept of honour from you?’ Tal’Aura asked, noticing that the half-breed did not carry her honour-blade.

‘You do not deserve honour, traitor,’ the woman retorted. ‘You only hold the position by virtue of being the only living senator, and that is only the case because you were part of Shinzon’s coup. You are the one who’s honour is in doubt.’

‘The guards will kill you if I so order it, and you are dangerously close to my doing so.’

‘If you kill me, I cannot report on the border conflicts.’

Tal’Aura cursed herself for assigning the half-breed to that godforsaken region of the empire. ‘Report!’ she snapped.

The half-breed smirked. ‘More than a dozen worlds have so far seized control from our people in an attempt to gain independence from the empire.’

Tal’Aura bristled. ‘This I already knew. I sent you there to stop them.’

‘Someone beat me to it,’ the half-breed shot back. ‘There is a plague sweeping through the border worlds, killing conquerors and conquered alike. Starfleet sent a ship to intervene but they have so far been unsuccessful.’

‘Does Captain Riker know of this?’

‘It is possible, has he not mentioned it to you?’

‘His work is concentrated on helping me retain power.’

The woman wisely decided not to reveal the faulty premise of that statement. The Federation was not interested in helping her remain in power, only making sure that someone was who could unite the empire. ‘What do you want me to do about the plague, let it decimate the border worlds?’

‘Find out who is responsible and bring them to me. Rihannsu are being killed as well. I cannot let this go unpunished. If the truth were to get out, I would be finished. If you are thinking of betraying me, I would reconsider. Remember that I have granted you the commission of a ship and a place as its commander.’

‘I have not forgotten, but people loyal to me run the vessel. I have already executed two of your spies.’

Tal’Aura said nothing. There were still three more aboard that old D’deridex-class vessel. ‘Return to the border worlds and do your duty as a soldier of the empire.’

The half-breed smiled and inclined her head in acknowledgement, though not enough to indicate respect. ‘I will learn who is responsible. What do you want me to do about the Starfleet vessel?’

‘Nothing for the moment. Let them cure the plague if they so choose. If and when they do, you may take it and destroy them. No one must learn the truth.’

‘Then you must gain control of the media quickly. It will not be long before the wealthy Houses learn that a Federation ship is operating within our borders without your authorisation.’

‘The media know nothing,’ Proconsul Tomalak stated as he emerged from the shadows. ‘Leave now, half-breed.’

She straightened to her full height, shorter than the arrogant proconsul. ‘I have a name.’

‘Yes you do, but it will not be spoken here. Be careful, lest I change my mind and have you executed for your numerous failures.’

The half-breed bowed, turned on her heel and left the chamber, her blonde hair peeking out from her hood. Tal’Aura sighed and glanced behind her.

‘You handled her well, Praetor.’

‘I think she handled me better, Tomalak.’

‘Perhaps, but what can she do? The last time she saw daylight was when Hiren was in that chair. There have been two Praetors and much upheaval since then.’

‘She will find a way to gain the upper hand, she always does. It is her best virtue and her worst failing. I can only hope that I am able to get to her first. Now, please tell where Commanders Donatra and Suran and her rogue fleet are?’

‘None of our people have reported in. The last report from them had the fleet somewhere close to the Great Bloom, what some of the people call Shinzon’s Folly.’

‘Well, if they’re hanging around there then they’re no threat, for the moment. What of the Remans and the Klingons?’

‘We cannot touch them for the moment and we are in no position to fight a war with the Klingons.’

‘That I already know. What of Director Rehaek?’

‘He is proving to be more difficult than expected to pin down. We know that he killed Senator Pardek, but I cannot say whether he will support you, at least not yet.’

‘Then I suggest you resort to other means,’ Tal’Aura replied. ‘Leave me, I wish to make some private calls.’

Tomalak bowed and left the audience chamber. He gestured for the guards to remain, leaving the Praetor alone with her thoughts. Tal’Aura stood and headed for her private office, ignoring the floor mosaic of ch’Rihan, Earth and the neutral zone. It might just be time to change it – at least to include the Klingon empire since it was now a foregone conclusion that the Havrannsu were being taken from her.
 
USS Pasteur
In orbit of Kevratas
Near the Romulan Neutral Zone
Stardate 57054.8


Lieutenant Commander Worf paced the bridge like a caged targ. Doctor Crusher did indeed spend most of her time on the surface, travelling to different hospitals to oversee the work of her various doctors and medical teams, but it meant that Worf was left in charge of the ship. He knew that Romulans were capable of fighting with honour, Commander Donatra had proven that to him, but he also knew that many were treacherous and deceitful, including the current praetor. It was for this reason alone that he was keeping the shields up on a permanent basis, and the reason why La Forge was continually coming up to the bridge to make sure that the engineering console was providing real time data. Worf finally sat in the command chair and watched the back of the alpha shift conn officer, Lieutenant Sara Nave. Her bearing, even while sitting down, reminded him of his own.

‘Lieutenant, do you not prefer security?’

Taken aback by this blunt question, the young human female turned to face the Klingon. ‘While I was chief of security on the Kilimanjaro, I often found that my job would be made easier by having pilots who actually had tactical experience. When I transferred to the Enterprise, I opted for the conn in order to test my theory. May I ask a question, sir?’

Worf inclined his head.

‘Why was I transferred to the Pasteur?’

‘It is only a temporary transfer, Lieutenant. At the completion of this mission you will return to your duties aboard the Enterprise. I asked for your inclusion in this mission because I agree with your theory. I have submitted your proposal to the Academy to include such training for conn and flight control officers.’

Nave’s eyes widened. ‘Thank you, sir.’

‘Starfleet officers must be widely trained and such training will prevent honourless deaths.’

Nave understood his reasoning, he could see that, but she did not appear to be focused on the helm. An alert klaxon sounded and she immediately identified the reason. Worf realised that she was completely aware.

‘Romulan warbird decloaking between us and the planet, sir. They’re beaming down personnel.’

‘Red alert, ready weapons and identify that vessel.’

‘Sensors identify the warbird as the Havoc. We’re receiving a hail from the surface.’

‘Put it through,’ Worf said, growling.

Worf, this is Crusher, we’re under attack down here. I need security reinforcements.’

‘We have a Romulan warbird up here, Doctor. I will send reinforcements when I can. How long can you hold out.’

I’m not sure, but the security are keeping the Romulans at bay for now.’

‘I will send help, Doctor, Worf out.’

‘Lieutenant, are they powering weapons?’

‘They are weapons hot, sir. If we lower the shields for transport we’ll be defenceless.’

‘Worf to La Forge, how long can the hull plating withstand an attack?’

A few minutes at best, why?’

‘Doctor Crusher needs reinforcements.’

We’d be risking the ship for a few people, Worf. It’s not worth it. The Kevrata need us.’

He was tempted to argue the point but knew the engineer was right. Nave apparently did as well. ‘We need a diversion,’ he said finally.

‘The D’deridex-class are old but they have no major weaknesses.’

‘Scan for any fractures in the hull and gaps in the shielding, no matter how small. We cannot fire first, but we will not sit idle.’

‘Scanning,’ Nave replied, having rerouted tactical to her station. ‘I’m picking up something in their engine core. Their primary coolant system is not operating properly.’

‘We can use that, prepare to lower the shields for precisely six seconds and target your weapons on those coordinates.’

‘Aye sir.’

‘Worf to security, prepare three teams for the surface, weapons ready.’

Leybenzon here, sir. We’ll need a moment to get ready.’

‘You have one minute.’

Sir, we need...

‘Mister Leybenzon, you are wasting time,’ Worf said in his most commanding tone. ‘Get to the transporter room.’

Aye sir.’

‘Are you ready, Lieutenant?’

‘Yes sir.’

‘Leybenzon, are you in position?’

Ready, sir.’

‘Prepare to beam down on my mark.’

Nave’s finger hovered over the shield deactivation key.

‘Mark,’ Worf said.

Nave dropped the shields and the transport process began. As expected, the Romulans opened fire the nanosecond the shields dropped and the Pasteur bucked as the shots impacted the ablative hull plating. Worf leaned forward in his chair as Nave fired a quantum torpedo followed by a photon torpedo. The shields around the Havoc’s engines flared and failed and she manoeuvred the ship into position to fire phasers at the engines. The shields returned and the Pasteur was no longer taking damaging hits. The Romulan vessel was venting drive plasma and no doubt suffering from the excess heat caused by the malfunctioning or destroyed coolant system.

‘Sir, why didn’t you ask them to identify themselves?’

‘Damage report, Lieutenant.’

‘Minor damage to the hull plating, long-range communications are offline...and we lost one security team when the Romulans hit a beam emitter.’

Worf slammed his fist onto the arm of the chair. ‘I hope Doctor Crusher has all that she needs.’

‘We’re being hailed, sir.’

‘Onscreen.’

The viewscreen changed from the view of the warbird to a face that Worf hoped never to see again. ‘Mister Worf, what a pleasant surprise,’ the Romulan woman said as the sounds of a badly damaged bridge erupted behind her.

‘What are you doing here?’ he asked.

Fulfilling my duty to the Empire. And what about your little band of doctors?’

‘Curing the plague you no doubt seeded this world with, honourless PetaQ.’

It wasn’t us, but you are in violation of the neutral zone. I suggest you leave before I am forced to destroy you.’

‘Not without my people.’

Then you leave me no choice,’ she turned away and nodded her head. ‘After the war, we were able to work on a few spoils. The weapon the Breen left behind, for example. I believe you’re familiar with it?’

Sela!’ Worf cursed as the screen blanked.

Nave turned to face him, her expression worried. ‘Sir?’

‘Evacuate the ship. Get everyone down to the surface. And send a distress buoy,’ the Klingon replied, narrowing his eyes at the screen.

‘Aye sir,’ she replied as the ship was hit by a concussive wave.

Alarms blared as the evacuation alarm sounded and every electronic circuit on board was instantly overloaded. Nave bounded from her chair but Worf stayed in his.

‘Sir, we have to go. Now.’

‘Perhaps today is a good day to die.’

‘Not this way,’ Nave said, standing face to face with him. ‘Die with honour, not sacrifice.’

Worf nodded and they both ran for the escape pods as the Pasteur began to fall apart around them.
 
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