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The TNG Relaunch - My version

Before he talks to everyone's favorite Klingon killing machine, we should buy him a T-shirt that says Any Other Man. I'm sure Captain Picard would appreciate the ironic humor there. :lol:
I got that straight away. He could be wearing the t-shirt under his uniform, freshly laundered.
 
IRW Havoc
Kevratas orbit
Stardate 57054.9


Commander Sela sat in the throne-like command chair of the D’deridex-class warbird and surveyed the destruction she had wrought. The Federation ship had not been destroyed, unfortunately, but it was adrift. Somehow the shields had remained active enough to withstand three plasma torpedoes but they were now down and she did not see the point in destroying the vessel. Returning it to the traitorous praetor might save her save in the short term. She glanced at the tactical display on the viewscreen and saw that most of the largest buildings in the capital city had been razed to the ground. The ground troops were taking casualties from both Starfleet security forces and the Kevrata themselves, and the fighters were actively searching for the medical personnel.

‘Where are the escape pods?’ she bellowed.

‘They have entered the atmosphere. The fighters were not able to reach the area before the survivors escaped detection,’ her first officer, a House-less Subcommander, replied.

‘Find them or you will die before the day is out.’

‘Yes, Commander,’ he bowed and returned to his station.

Sela overheard his whispered mutterings to the tactical officer regarding likely locations where the survivors might have gone to ground.

‘Find caves, there are always caves,’ she ordered, not quite hiding her temper.

As Subcommander Raketh turned back to his station to begin his scans in earnest, Sela continued to glare at the hulk of the starship. Something in her gut told her that there was a problem but she had been wrong before. Even a cursory glance told her that the Federation ship had multiple hull breaches, many of which were still venting atmosphere; was venting drive plasma from both nacelles and was clearly adrift. Somehow the core had not breached which was fortunate, for this close to a planetary surface, the effect would be devastating and not conducive to her efforts.

With Commander Donatra having recently returned from a journey to Enhaire, she was attracting several ships to her cause against the Praetor and Sela hoped to join her military leader, but so far no offer had been given. If Donatra would not ask, then Sela would take. She was tired of being the infamous half-breed, the only blonde Romulan – though she never considered dying her hair, it was not military protocol – and was planning to take this world for herself. First of all, she needed to find a cure and knew that Starfleet was close to finding one. Her operative was honest about that if nothing else.

‘There are caves at the base of the mountains at the edge of the city, but the mineral deposits are interfering with the scanners,’ Raketh said without looking up.

‘Send the fighters to bombard the region. Then send in troops to secure the area.’

‘What if they did not head for the caves?’ he asked, knowing it could mean his death.

‘Why wouldn’t they?’ she shot back, daring him to stand up for himself.

He did so. ‘The Klingon sent a signal, probably indicating a landing site for the escape pods. We should have the fighters and troops look for them.’

‘Split our teams on the surface. We can transport them where they need to go.’

‘Right away, Commander.’

‘Good work, Raketh, you might make Commander yet.’

‘Only by killing you,’ he muttered under his breath .

She turned away and scowled, wondering how long it would be before someone on her misbegotten crew tried to take command or just assassinate her. This wasn’t a Klingon ship after all.

This was no time for lapses In concentration or judgement. The Starfleeters were capable of looking after themselves when it was crunch time and with the near destruction of their ship, the loss of their main facilities on the surface, and the loss of a number of their personnel, it could be considered crunch time. All she had to do was find Doctor Crusher and her senior medical team, extract the cure from them, and she would have a dozen worlds to call her own. One ship was not enough to patrol twelve systems, and there were too few people who still owed her favours to help with that issue. She did have a plan for that eventuality and would set it in motion once she had the cure.

‘Commander, I’m reading a vessel approaching at low warp.’

‘Has it detected us?’

‘Not yet.’

‘Cloak the ship and move us into a higher orbit, but still in transporter range. Identify the vessel and prepare to destroy it.’

‘Firing solution ready.’

‘Excellent. What of the hunt?’

‘The fighters are approaching the cave system now. They are firing on the upper sections of the mountains.’

Sela nodded. ‘Have the ground troops stand by. Where is the approaching ship?’

‘Entering the system now.’

‘On viewer.’

The image of Kevratas disappeared to be replaced by what looked like a Xepolite Free Trader as it slowed to sublight speed. Sela watched the vessel adjust course for Kevratas approach and then, before she could issue a warning, the vessel changed course again and jumped to warp.

‘Course heading and speed?’

Raketh looked up. ‘Federation space, warp six. Should we pursue?’

She shook her head. ‘No, the Federation were going to find out sooner or later. The freighter still has to navigate through the Neutral Zone. Concentrate on the hunt for the medical staff. The sooner we have them, the sooner we can deal with this blighted world.’

The Federation will send someone to investigate.’

‘Yes, they will, and we will be ready for them when they arrive. It will take time for them to decide what to do, especially now that Captain Riker is no longer in Rihannsu space.’

Raketh nodded and bent over his controls. ‘The ground troops are entering the cave system. We will know shortly whether they were hiding out or not.’

Sela relaxed into her chair. She felt the rough leather of her old warbird and was glad to be back aboard. This time she would make her enemies pay for the dishonour they had caused her and her kin. Though she had not brought a child into the world yet, she wanted to, and would not do so until her honour was clear.
 
OOOOh, she is a vicious b****! She better hope she doesn't accidentally find Worf-I hear he doesn't take losing his ship very well.
 
Vindictive - thy name is Sela! She had best watch her back, considering how she treats her crew. I doubt few tears would be shed if she suffered an . . . accident?
 
While digging her graves, Sela needs to make sure she digs one for herself--I have a feeling she's going to need this before its all said and done. That being said, it's not a bad plan she's come up with--really her only option is to bide her time, husband her resources, and play warlord. Her big flaw: she hasn't read her Machiavelli completely--while it might be better to be feared than loved, one must never be despised and she's working hard on being despised by her crew.
 
I think yes :devil:

I've always viewed Sela as basically hating and despising herself, while at the same time trying to prove to everyone--and herself--that she's even more Romulan than any other Romulan, so it would be perfectly logical for her to drive everyone else away from her.
 
I think yes :devil:

I've always viewed Sela as basically hating and despising herself, while at the same time trying to prove to everyone--and herself--that she's even more Romulan than any other Romulan, so it would be perfectly logical for her to drive everyone else away from her.


Especially after the setbacks she's suffered. Like I said, one mean B****!
 
Starfleet Headquarters
San Francisco, Earth
Stardate 57059.2


Captain Jean-Luc Picard ignored the calls of assistants and security personnel as he wound his way through the offices of the admiralty. He was interested in a single person and the story she had to tell him. Second-hand sources were acceptable to corroborate stories but not as first hand information. As if knowing about his presence, Admiral Janeway was standing outside her office waiting for him. Without waiting for an invitation he strode past her, into her office, and turned to face her. His expression was not a pleasant one.

‘I gather you’ve heard about the Pasteur?’

He glared at her. ‘Why did I have to hear it from an Ensign who overheard it in a bar than from you?’

Janeway sighed. ‘I planned to tell you when Command had decided on what to do.’

Picard took a deep breath. ‘The Enterprise is ready to leave at a moment’s notice.’

‘You know that’s not true as well as I do. There are a dozen systems that need to be checked out before you can leave the system and the library needs to be upgraded.’

‘The LCARS system is being upgraded as we speak and my crew are being recalled. Final replacements are en route and the engineers are performing shakedown simulations.’

‘You’re going to rush the ship out of Spacedock to go and find Doctor Crusher and her crew, without all the intelligence that we have?’

Picard shook his head. ‘Oh no, I’m taking the Enterprise to retrieve Doctor Crusher, Worf, Geordi and the others, find a cure to the plague and stop the Romulans from killing any more people—on either side—and you’re going to give me all the intelligence you have.’

‘Am I now?’ Janeway frowned.

‘Now that Captain Riker has gone to explore the Gum Nebula, I am the most qualified in Romulan affairs, excluding Spock that is.’

‘He is unavailable,’ Janeway retorted and realised that she had just made Picard’s point. ‘And what do you plan to do when you reach Kevratas? The report from the Xepolite trader was sketchy at best.’

‘I’m going to find the Xepolite first and get a copy of his sensor logs. Then I will go to Kevratas and retrieve my crew, rescue the crew of the Pasteur and continue Doctor Crusher’s work.’

Janeway nodded. ‘You appear to have this all thought out.’

‘Admiral, let’s stop playing games. You knew what I was planning to do and have been fast-tracking everything I’ve submitted.’

‘Alright, that’s true. I know you better than I think you do. I just have one request.’

‘Which is?’

‘I want you to take a promising young man as your first officer.’

‘I have Worf.’

‘He has yet to accept and Commander Kadohata is not yet ready under these circumstances.’

Picard frowned. ‘Who did you have in mind?’

Janeway handed over a padd. ‘Commander Martin Madden, second officer on the Talos. He’s a little green for an XO but is enthusiastic and eager. I think he’ll be a good addition to your crew.’

‘Do I have a choice in the matter?’

‘Consider it a favour, Captain, for fast-tracking your requests. That padd also contains everything we have on Kevratas and the Romulan political situation. As far as we know, the Xepolite is heading back toward the Neutral Zone.’

Picard nodded. ‘Have him report aboard. I’ll see to it that he is properly welcomed.’

Janeway touched his shoulder. ‘Thank you, Jean-Luc.’

‘If I may be excused,’ he said dourly, ‘I’d like to begin final preparations.’

Janeway nodded. ‘Dismissed.’

Picard exited her office and headed directly for the transporter pad, this time unmolested by assistants and security personnel. Before he transported, he tapped his combadge. ‘Picard to Enterprise.’

Kadohata,’ his second officer and acting XO, Miranda Kadohata replied.

‘Commander, I’m beaming back aboard momentarily, and I want to see you in my ready room. Have the ship ready to leave in three hours.’

He could almost see her grin. ‘Yes sir, Kadohata out.’ She had recently returned to the Enterprise after serving with him on her predecessor and she had become a more capable officer in the meantime. He was glad to have her aboard.

Picard materialised in transporter room two, nodded to the operator and headed for the bridge. As the doors slid open he noticed that there were far too many people. Apart from the engineers who were checking everything over, his new counsellor was standing by her chair staring at the new conn officer, who was staring straight back.

‘Is there a problem here?’

Counsellor T’Lana raised an eyebrow and replied in a scathing tone. ‘Ensign McGowan believes that she is not responsible for helm control while we are in Spacedock and requests an early end to her shift. I informed her that she should remain at her post until relieved.’

Everybody on the bridge studiously ignored them.

McGowan glared right back at the supercilious Vulcan. ‘I asked if I could be relieved for a few minutes, Captain, citing the fact that we are in Spacedock and as such unlikely to run into any spatial anomalies.’

Picard smiled. ‘You may relieve yourself, Ensign. Counsellor, rigid adherence to regulations is not in the best interest of crew morale, regardless of spatial location. Please remember that.’

‘Captain, perhaps you would not look to kindly on Ensign McGowan if she asked to be relieved during a crisis.’

‘I trust my crew, Counsellor. And you would do well to remember that. When Lieutenant Battaglia arrives in eleven minutes please inform him that he has the conn. Until that time, the bridge is yours.’

T’Lana nodded. ‘Yes sir. Commander Kadohata is in your ready room.’

‘Thank you,’ Picard replied and crossed the bridge.

Miranda Kadohata was standing by the window when he entered. ‘At ease, Commander,’ he said when she stiffened.

‘Is there a problem, sir?’

‘Not as such.’ He disliked these conversations and steeled himself. ‘I have been asked to take on a temporary first officer for the duration of this mission. You may return to your regular duties.’

‘Thank you, Captain,’ Kadohata replied. ‘Permission to speak freely?’

Picard raised an eyebrow slightly but nodded.

‘I can accept taking command when it is necessary, but I did not feel entirely comfortable taking over the role so completely.’

He nodded again. ‘Commander Madden will be arriving shortly. I’d like you to help him settle in and give him a tour of the ship. We will depart as previously scheduled.’

‘Aye sir,’ she replied and strode out, relieved.

Picard turned to face the window.

‘I’m coming, Beverly.’
 
I liked how you portrayed Picard in this segment. When he gets a bee in his bonnet, he doesn't take no for an answer.

This new command crew will need to gel before facing Sela and her forces. I hope they can manage that before they reach Kevratas!
 
I am really enjoying this story. You have the conversations and the characters down pat. Eagerly awaiting more
 
I hope Miranda and the new guy get along-Picard already has a Counselor with a corncob up her...derrière, and he doesn't need any more problems while rescuing Bev. Nice characterization-I'm working with Picard myself right now and scratching my head about how to keep him in character. You did a good job.
 
Catacombs
Under Kevratas City
Stardate 57060.1


Lieutenant Leybenzon had watched Commander Worf emerge from the escape pod carrying an unconscious helmswoman and rushed to help. More than three dozen escape pods landed in the lake and floated on the surface as shaken doctors, nurses and technicians clambered out an swam to shore. Crusher and her medical team assisted those who were injured and while the fighters were elsewhere, she and Worf led the crew of the Pasteur and the valiant Kevrata to the underground catacombs. Leybenzon always stayed three paces behind Worf lest he try and make a run for it, though for some reason he knew that the Klingon would not do so. Zelik knew that he was one of a rare breed in Starfleet, having risen from being a non-commissioned officer to an officer and he had little love for commanders and those above in the chain of command, thinking them incapable of making the right decisions when it counted. Doctor Crusher was a command-level officer but she was not trained for command and could be forgiven for lapses in judgement. Worf was trained for command and still made incorrect decisions, such as abandoning the fight, and the crew.

‘Worf, where is Geordi?’ he heard Doctor Crusher ask as they traversed the catacombs to get as deep as they could. Three Kevrata led them.

‘He was in engineering when the energy dampening pulse hit the ship,’ the sullen Klingon replied. ‘He had enough time to make it out.’

Leybenzon could hold his tongue no longer. ‘You let him die, coward!’

Leybenzon went down like a sack of potatoes as Worf lashed out. The Klingon picked him up off the floor and pulled him close so that the security chief could smell his breath. ‘I have killed men for less. Hold your tongue, or I will feed it to you.’

Crusher placed her hand of Worf’s shoulder. ‘Let him go, Worf. He doesn’t know you as well as I do,’ she said, glaring at the security chief.

Leybenzon straightened his uniform. ‘I’ll be reporting you for that.’

‘Go ahead,’ Worf replied and strode ahead.

‘I warned you,’ Crusher said. ‘Be careful what you say to him.’

‘He’s a coward!’ Leybenzon hissed. ‘Your engineer is probably dead or being tortured.’

Crusher winced, knowing that La Forge had been tortured before. Before she could say a word, Worf hauled Leybenzon off the floor and held him against a wall. ‘I will not kill you for your insults, but be careful that you don’t trip and hurt yourself, severely.’

‘I would never leave my post until everyone was safe,’ the security chief muttered.

Worf growled. ‘I have seen the damage done by that honourless weapon. Thousands of Starfleet officers and Romulans died because of it. I saved as many as I could, and if my friend has been tortured, the Romulan responsible will die a slow painful death.’

Leybenzon swallowed at the fire in Worf’s words and eyes and had no doubt that Sela, whoever she was, had made a rather fatal mistake. Worf let him drop to the floor and continued walking. Crusher left the security chief where he was and hurried to catch up with the Klingon.

‘You know that Geordi survived, don’t you?’ she asked.

Worf kept walking but turned to face her, his face almost unreadable. Then he let a smirk cross his face. ‘No escape pods were launched from main engineering. Geordi is therefore still alive and actively working.’

‘You don’t know that for sure,’ she replied. ‘You’re just hoping he is.’

‘I will not be responsible for my actions if he is not,’ Worf said and remained silent.

Crusher sighed and kept pace, watching the Kevrata ahead of her for any sign of the jaceta or fatigue. She hoped that Leybenzon would now keep his mouth shut and not antagonise Worf further for the sensed that the Klingon was waging with some very personal demons and the security chief’s questioning of his character was not helping matters. They had been walking for well over a day, stopping when they could for a quick drink of water or a bite of a ration bar, but Worf wanted to go as deep as possible, thinking that if the Romulans didn’t find them on the surface they would raze the city. They must hope that no one pointed out the catacombs. From her weeks on the planet she knew that few Kevrata had any loyalty to the Romulans but when it came down to it, they had been under Romulan control for centuries, there were bound to be a few who would betray their fellows for some favours.

‘Where are we going, Hanafaejas?’ Crusher asked of the Kevrata underground leader.

‘The deepest part of the catacombs. We have a camp there,’ he replied, tapping the cave wall as he walked.

‘How long?’ asked Worf, glancing behind him at Leybenzon and Lieutenant Nave who had survived her trip to the planet with nothing more than a minor concussion.

‘Another three kilometres.’

Worf growled but continued at his present pace. Leybenzon hadn’t said a word to the Klingon and did not plan to, not unless he was spoken to directly. He doubted that was going to happen since Worf seemed to have taken an instant dislike to him. The second battle of Chin’toka was a major defeat for the Federation alliance, that he knew, and the rumours of a terrible weapon being used by the Breen was supposed to be responsible, but he had never believed that—until now. He had always thought that it was something which was said to give the demoralised troops something else to blame, other than their incompetent leaders. But now he knew that such a weapon had been used, and that the dozens of commanding officers—and the thousands of officers and non-coms—who had died had not done so through sheer negligence, he was rethinking his position.

‘Lieutenant, cover for me,’ Leybenzon whispered to Nave and headed back the way they had come.

‘Zelik!’ she called and Worf turned round.

‘Where is he going?’

‘I don’t know, he asked me to cover for him.’

With a snarl, Worf hurried after him. ‘Worf?’ Crusher called.

‘We should keep moving, Doctor,’ Nave said.

‘You used to be a security officer, didn’t you, before you joined the conn?’

‘Yes ma’am.’

‘Then you’re the acting chief until Leybenzon returns. Let’s keep moving.’
 
interesting-but I need to see more-where are u going?

Your Security Chief seems like an idiot to confront Worf-what can he possibly be thinking?
 
Hell of a first command for Beverly! Leybenzon definitely has his problems and problems like his have a way of getting people killed. Worf's also mired in personal demons.

Great job of balancing external and internal conflicts here as you maintain an accurate portrayal of the canon characters.
 
It appears Leybenzon has his own problems. He obviously has no clue what happened at the Second Battle of Chin'toka, nor does he realize how close he came to getting his head ripped off by calling Worf a coward.

For now, it seems that the crew of the Pasteur are in the midst of a royal SNAFU.
 
Is there any more of this story? Waiting for the next installment
I can promise you that there is more coming, but RL has been cutting into my time severely over the last week. It is a religious holiday this weekend but I hope to get something posted on all my work by the end of next week.

Patience, Grasshopper.
 
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