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Re: Star Trek: 500 Rising Tides

Agreed! McCoy was my favorite TOS character. You did a nice job of portraying his irascible personality.

So, Turner is related to Zephram Cochrane. Interesting! You clear up a few mysteries, then add more. Well done! :)
 
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Thanks guys, I wasn't really sure if I could capture the real McCoy (pun intended) and I thought mention of the transporters would be a good start.

That is effectively the end of Part One. I'll get the next section up by next weekend hopefully. It depends how busy I am this week since a promotion is in the works (yay!) and I do have other RL writing projects on the g as well.

Glad you like it.
 
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I also thought that you've done a good job with McCoy.

I still very much like this premise here and also were it is leading us. I like the mystery here and the steps your protagonist has to go through to get some answers.

But I wouldn't think that he really needed to join Starfleet just to travel to a planet. There must be many different ways to travel through space as a private citizen.

Still the mystery is fascinating and I'm interested to see what the truth behind his strange trip through time really is.
 
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You're quite right CeJay, Ashley may be able to travel to a planet through civilian means - but he would need to have Federation credits or some other form of currency to do so - which he doesn't yet have. Maybe I should have made that point *shrug* but I have a plan for this series.

I just hope it doesn't evolve and have a plan for me.
 
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Ashley Turner, personal log, August 29th 2364, stardate 41659.8
In the five weeks since I learned that I was related to the father of the modern space era, I gained my high school diploma and started to study for a bachelor’s degree in engineering. I felt that gaining all the theoretical practices in engineering was fine, but since I was not able to attend university I would not be able to gain the experience in working with the technology necessary to enlist into Starfleet. Speaking with my distance learning professor, I learned that there was a hands-on course run by Starfleet Academy for university students and civilians who wished to go into the field of engineering, and she would try to get me a place. I thanked her but didn’t think I’d be successful since there were likely to be thousands of applicants from across the Federation. A week after our conversation, she contacted me saying that I had been accepted onto the course because of my test scores. I also learned that passing this course would provide me with extra credits for my bachelor’s degree.

Two days later I arrived on the grounds with a visitor’s pass which allowed me access to just one building, the Tucker Memorial Building and headquarters of the Starfleet Corps of Engineers, where the course was run. On the eleventh floor there were a number of lecture theatres and seminar rooms in addition to laboratories for practicals. When I walked in to the lecture hall for the introduction, I saw about three hundred other people, many of which wore Starfleet uniforms, and I sat in the approximate centre of the lecture theatre, looking around and admiring these people who’d dedicated their lives to helping others. I was almost overwhelmed but I kept myself busy by making notes on the padd which had been given to me by Counsellor Mathias on my high school graduation. A few minutes later a bell sounded and a man wearing admiral’s pips entered the room. He perched on the table at the front and looked around.

‘Welcome to the engineering extension course. I’m sure many of you who have studied history know who I am and what I do. For those of you that don’t, I’ll tell you. My name is John Harriman and I am the liaison officer between the Corps of Engineers and the rest of Starfleet. What you will learn in this course is the basics on how to repair damaged equipment, both in and outside of battle conditions. If your communications are down and you need to get off-planet this will come in handy. Many of you work in security or command, and I see some scientists and doctors here as well. This extension course is a good way of becoming a well-rounded officer capable of working in a variety of disciplines.’

Harriman activated a display behind him. ‘What you see here is the course curriculum. Download it to your padds and look through it thoroughly. I want you all back here this afternoon for your first taster. That’s all for now.’

I spent the morning working my way through the basics of the entire curriculum for the course and as had happened before, memories I shouldn’t have came to the fore. My hidden knowledge of warp mechanics and sensor imaging seemed wholly out of place but I was sure that I could pass this course—and it would put me one step closer to enlisting in Starfleet and hopefully getting out to Gamma Canaris. I considered going through civilian channels but I had no money, (or Federation credits, I should say) or any other currency which I would need if I was to get out there. Additionally, Gamma Canaris didn’t appear to be on any major trade route or near any useful planet. I’d been thinking that my motives were not entirely pure for enlisting in Starfleet, since I was not exactly doing it to better myself or anyone else. I wanted to know who I was and where I came from, and I couldn’t learn anything more on Earth. It could be many years before I even got the chance to go to Gamma Canaris and even then I might not find anything left.

That afternoon I returned with the other students to the lecture theatre and Admiral Harriman was once again perched on the table. I learned that he was the former captain of the former Federation flagship, the Enterprise, and that he considered his position as liaison to be vital to the engineering prowess of the Corps. Harriman waited until the last seat was filled—the one next to me—before beginning.

‘Glad you could join us, Cadet Ro,’ Harriman said with a smile.

The young woman next to me just scowled and looked at the admiral as if he was target practice. Harriman ignored the glare and faced the rest of the students. ‘I’m sure that some of you wonder why you should take this elective course and I have a simple answer for you. Knowledge is power. On my first day in command of the Enterprise, Captain Kirk was killed saving my ship. I could have reconfigured the deflector dish but he reminded me that my place was on the bridge of my ship, that risk is part of the job if I wanted to sit in that chair. If I had known then what I know now; I would never have agreed to leave spacedock with a skeleton crew and a barely-finished ship. You may all one day have to undertake a dangerous with very little at your disposal and what you learn here could be the difference between surviving and dying. But the best time to improvise is when you need it the most, when the ship is falling apart around you and the captain wants a miracle five minutes ago.’

The lecture went on for well over an hour and we were told exactly what was expected of us in the coming weeks. I kept stealing glances at the young woman next to me because her devil-may-care attitude was somewhat infectious, and I knew it was dangerous to get too close to her but I couldn’t help it. Once we were dismissed, I tried to talk with her but she ran—much faster than I could—into another building, one that I had no access to. I was about to return to my apartment when I felt a hand on my shoulder. It was Admiral Harriman.
 
Re: Star Trek: 500 Rising Tides

Shields up! - Incoming attitude! :lol:

I was also surprised to see Ro (I dare you to knock the chip off my shoulder) Laren. I expect she'll bring some complications to the story!
 
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I wasn't actually sure about including her since in "Ensign Ro" her graduation year was 2364, but in later episodes it was changed to 2362 - albeit on Okudagrams - so I went with the original year given.
 
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I liked her appearance here as well. And you handled her really well. I wonder if she'll be a recurring character.

In fact your setting might allow for plenty of very interesting cameo and guest appearances, as you have already proven.
 
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Ashley Turner, personal log, supplemental
I turned to face the admiral and he smiled in a paternal way at me. ‘She’s a little too high strung for you, I think.’

‘With all due respect, sir, I think she’s a little too young for you.’

Harriman laughed. ‘Oh no, she’s more like my daughter than I care to admit, but you would do well not to stand in her way. She’ll be graduating just as soon as she finishes this course, and I know more than a few captains who would like someone like her aboard, and plenty who wouldn’t.’

I didn’t have anything to say to that, so I said nothing. After a few moments, Harriman gestured for me to take a seat on one of the benches that were spaced fairly evenly around the grounds.

‘I hear that you’ve been bounced around in time a little.’

‘News gets around,’ I murmured.

‘True, but your history is rather interesting. I accepted this job because I wanted to solve problems and one of the biggest was getting the Corps to be accepted across the fleet. I like unusual problems and I think that your current situation is something I would like to find out more about. For someone who appears to be lost in time, you seem to know a lot about sensors and warp engines, even if it is a little out of date.’

‘I will have caught up by next week,’ I told him.

His right eyebrow rose in surprise. ‘Next week? I’ll hold you to that.’

I had no idea what he wanted me to do but I knew that it would be a great test of my knowledge and people skills, which still needed work. ‘Whatever you make me do, I will do it well. I have something to accomplish and I will do whatever it takes to reach that goal.’

‘Like reaching Gamma Canaris?’

‘How did you know about that, sir?’

He tapped the side of his nose. ‘I’m not going to tell you that, but suffice it to say that you have a lot of people interested in where you go from here. Some wish you luck and others are hoping you find nothing, but they won’t interfere.’

‘It seems that everyone else knows far more about me than I do.’

Harriman waved his hand in a “so-so” motion. ‘It might appear that way, but it isn’t true. What we do know about you makes us intrigued about your situation and your history. I for one will provide you with whatever help I can, if you pass the course.’

‘I’ll pass,’ I said, standing straighter.

‘Good, because once you enlist I hope you join the Corps of Engineers. You’ll experience an operational tempo unlike anything else in the fleet. The Corps mops up after battles, solves the puzzles of the galaxy and that’s before breakfast. We’re the ultimate in “have tech, will travel.” If you join the Corps, I will do my best to find a way to get you to Gamma Canaris, but you will have to be open to revealing your identity—such as you know it—and your history to the commanding officer of the vessel you are assigned to.’

‘Is it going to be a science vessel of some kind?’

Harriman appeared to suppress a grimace. ‘I’m trying to get the Corps assigned ships of its own that are state of the art, but the best they have at the moment are the old Oberth-class ships that are ready to be decommissioned. Keep this to yourself for now, Mister Turner, but by the time you enlist, I might have small teams of Corps personnel on ships of the line. It’s an experiment to see whether such things will work but we shall see. Now be off with you. I want you completely ready for the first practical tomorrow.’

With that dismissal, Harriman stood and strode back into the Tucker Memorial Building. I stayed where I was and had almost decided to return home when a shadow loomed over me.

‘Are you going to stay there all night?’ A grizzled voice asked.

I looked up and saw an old man wearing dirty clothes. I almost mistook him for a vagrant of some kind before I noticed the gardening tools in his hand.

‘If you’re just going to sit there, you might as well help me with these,’ he added, pointing to some plants.

Something about his manner made me accept his offer. ‘My name’s Ashley,’ I said as I crouched down and began hoeing the earth.

‘Boothby,’ he replied tetchily. ‘Be careful not to overdo it. Too much air in the soil can be deadly for these particular species.’

‘I’ve never heard of any plants being affected that way before.’

‘These aren’t Terran, you know.’

‘They’re not?’

‘No, they’re from Utopia Colony on Mars, my home dome.’

I decided not to mention the obvious, that these plants were actually an extinct Terran species that the early Martian colonists had been able to genetically engineer. We worked in silence for some time and when I looked up again, there was another shadow. This one was not caused by the twilight which had settled over the grounds, but by the trim figure of the angry woman who’d sat next to me earlier.

‘Cadet Ro, are you out for an evening stroll?’ Boothby asked evenly. ‘Try not to kick over any pots this time.’

Ro snorted, wrinkled her wrinkly nose even further in my direction and strutted off.

Boothby smiled at my sigh. ‘I don’t think so, lad. She’s too headstrong for a sensible person to handle.’

‘Maybe I can tame her wild streak?’

The old man chuckled. ‘I’ve been alive for more than a century, and I’ve been here for over forty years. I have seen a lot of happenings, but if you managed to tame that tigress, I will have seen everything.’

‘I should be going, it’s late and I need to be rested for the morning.’

‘You will be, Mister Turner, you will be,’ Boothby said as he stood up. ‘Keep an eye on this plot for me, will you. I’m not as young as I used to be.’

I stood and left the grounds, thinking that Boothby knew a lot more about what was going on at the Academy than anyone believed.
 
Re: Star Trek: 500 Rising Tides

And Ashley meets Boothby and seems to have developed a yen for Ro--will we see an attempted "Taming of the Shrew" here?
 
Re: Star Trek: 500 Rising Tides

I like the idea of Ro as a love interest. This could be interesting ... very intersting indeed.
 
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Ashley Turner, personal log, September 11th 2364, stardate 41695.4
Admiral Harriman was true to his word, as was I. I had indeed caught up with the technical schematics of both the modern warp drive and the standard sensor arrays of modern starships like the Galaxy-class Enterprise. The admiral was not standing in front of the class today. Instead, a fairly young woman (young for this century, she was probably in her forties) with dark brown hair and beatific smile, dressed in a jade green two-piece suit with a white collar. She, like Harriman, waited until everyone was seated, and then paced the dais while she spoke.

‘My name is Leah Brahms and I work for the Theoretical Propulsion Group at Mars Station. I am the youngest member of Project Galaxy, the group primarily responsible for the design of the warp drive system for the new Galaxy-class starships. Now, since the Galaxy-class is still a relatively new design, there may be flaws in it which have yet to be determined even though production of the class is in full swing. I’ve come here today at the bequest of Admiral Harriman to speak with you about what those flaws might be and how you could deal with them should they arise.’

A number of cadets raised their hands and provided a variety of answers related to the warp core itself. I found myself thinking along different lines and raised my hand once the initial flurry had died down.

‘Yes?’ Brahms pointed to me.

‘Since you developed much of the core’s systems, did you also work on the software?’

She nodded. ‘I did, what flaws did you have in mind?’

Here goes, I thought. ‘It is not so much the software as the security for the software. If someone from inside the ship amends the software would the computer alert the chief engineer? If someone outside the ship manages to breach the firewalls, would the chief engineer be alerted to the amendments?’

‘What amendments were you thinking of?’

‘I was thinking of changing the ejection system to vent the antimatter into the ship, for example.’

She frowned. ‘So in the event of a core breach, the ship would be destroyed by the saboteur.’

‘Exactly.’

‘It is possible, but anyone attempting to break into the computer would need several security codes in order to do so and exceptional skill with those specific systems. ‘I spent weeks looking over the program code for the warp ejection systems and I didn’t find anything that could be used to circumvent them.’

‘You left a back door in there, didn’t you?’

Brahms nodded and I could see she didn’t like this line of questioning. I could also feel the eyes of the other cadets on me and I knew that I had to keep going. ‘Whoever decided to destroy a Galaxy-class starship that way would know you were involved in it, and might seek to take the information from you. With the back door at their disposal, they could do whatever they wanted to the warp engines and the vessel would be at their complete will.’

Brahms nodded. ‘A well thought out argument, sir. Bear in mind though that I could have added a security precaution to prevent anyone else from tampering with the back door.’

‘Which you would reveal to them under torture. Miss Brahms.’

‘It’s Doctor Brahms, actually. You may be right about that, but if someone were to get control of the ship, there would likely be nothing that anyone could do, and so I think we should move on to another possible flaw.’

I smiled, having thought about what one could do. ‘An engineer could wipe the computer core and with it all the programming, thereby preventing the hacker from destroying the vessel.’

‘The warp core would still breach,’ she shot back.

‘Not if said engineer then wrote a basic ejection sequence and initialised it.’

‘And the rest of the ship would be a floating tin can without the computer system,’ a familiar voice chimed in.

‘Cadet Ro has a point, Mister Turner,’ Admiral Harriman said, entering the room.

I knew that blowing her theory out of the water would probably end any chance I had with this temperamental woman but that couldn’t be helped. ‘The ship’s computer core can be rebuilt from one of the shuttles as a temporary measure until the ship reaches a drydock where it can be overhauled.’

Harriman chuckled. ‘He’s got you beat, Ro.’

She snorted.

‘What do you think, Doctor? Has this young man given you anything to think about?’

Brahms nodded. ‘Plenty, all of it bad.’

‘That’s all for today, ladies and gentlemen,’ Harriman said, striding to the front of the theatre. ‘I would like to thank Doctor Brahms for coming here today and I hope that you have all learned something valuable from this exchange. Learning the basics and the theory of warp mechanics and so forth is all well and good but when it comes to the crunch you have to think outside the box. That’s what miracle workers are made of.’

As everyone filed out, and Brahms made a hasty exit, Harriman called out again. Ro, Turner, wait behind please.’

The Bajoran gave me a foul look but I ignored it and headed for the dais. When Ro reached it a few seconds later, Harriman gestured for them to take seats in the front row.

‘You have both shown a remarkable proclivity for thinking outside the box and I want you to be the first to know that the first vessel that has been chosen for my grand experiment is the USS Wellington.’

‘My ship?’ Ro asked and Harriman nodded.

‘Ro has already graduated the Academy, Mister Turner. She currently holds the rank of Lieutenant for graduating at the top of her class.’

‘I am the helm officer aboard the Wellington, at least I was,’ she replied, shooting a look at Harriman.

‘You are being temporarily transferred to engineering at the completion of this course for a period of six months. If all goes well, you’ll be promoted to full lieutenant and returned to the helm.’

She nodded and with a nod from Harriman, turned on her heel and walked out.
 
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better. It improves as you go. Well thought out argument regarding the computer.
 
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Ashley Turner, personal log, October 21st 2364, stardate 41804.9
Five weeks after the little chat I had with Admiral Harriman and Lieutenant Ro, I found that I had completed—and passed—the engineering extension course and learned that I could continue my studies while serving as an enlisted crewman. After graduation, Harriman picked out six of the engineers, me and Ro included, and herded us into one of the small seminar rooms. None of us said as word and Ro just sat by herself. I joined her and was dredging up the courage to speak with her when Harriman entered with a new face in tow. Both men pulled chairs up and the rest of the group sat, moving their chairs into an approximate circle.

‘Ladies and gentlemen, this is Lieutenant Commander Zane Cavanaugh,’ Harriman introduced the newcomer. ‘He is the assistant chief engineer of the USS Wellington, a Niagara-class science vessel shortly to be tasked with exploring ancient ruins in and around the Garon system. Commander, I’ll turn this briefing over to you.’

‘The Garonians were a space-faring civilisation approximately five hundred thousand years ago and almost nothing is known about what happened to them other than the fact that they left behind one partially constructed vessel in a surface shipyard. The Admiral is using you as his great experiment, to see whether a team of the Engineering Corps can coexist on a ship of the line with run-of-the-mill Starfleet. As the assistant chief engineer I will be handling some of the standard duties on board, but when the Corps is needed, I will lead you down to the surface and you will work under my guidance.’

I knew that this type of coexistence was doomed to fail because having interacted with my fellow Corps engineers, I knew that they were a fickle bunch and the rules and regulations were there merely as guidelines when not working on a project or ten.

‘Any questions?’ Harriman asked.

‘Who is your second in command?’ Ro asked.

‘As the most senior officer in the group, you are,’ Cavanaugh answered. ‘All of your duty stations will be assigned to you by Commander Mendez, the executive officer, when you report on board. You should all be aboard by fifteen hundred hours tomorrow.’

‘Dismissed,’ Harriman ordered and we left.

I spent the next few hours in a daze since I was packing up my meagre possessions and stuffing them into a standard-issue carryall. I wanted to say goodbye to Doctor Mathias and Doctor Allen but they were both busy so I recorded a message, informing them that I was now an enlisted crewman and being assigned to the Wellington. I had no idea what to expect but I was excited about being back in space...back in space? I didn’t realise I had been in space before, not really. Some of my memories were still unreachable about my twenty-third century life and I hoped to gain access to those memories soon, although it seemed that when I needed them they were there. It was quite disconcerting.

I had never seen a Niagara-class starship before except in holos and it was a striking sight. The general design was similar to that of all Starfleet vessels but the Niagara-class had three Galaxy-style nacelles (two dorsal and one ventral) attached to an Ambassador-style secondary hull which connected to a saucer module resembling a smaller version of the Galaxy-class saucer. It was an impressive sight and I was so enraptured by its beauty that I didn’t hear someone walk up to me.

‘She is beautiful, isn’t she?’ Lieutenant Ro said.

‘She’s as beautiful as the woman who flew her,’ I murmured.

‘Hmph,’ the Bajoran snorted.

‘Well, it’s true,’ I retorted, ‘Sir.’

She glared at me for a few moments and then clasped my shoulder. ‘Come on, Ashley. Let’s get your gear stowed away. I’m sure Commander Mendez will be overjoyed to see me again,’ she added sarcastically.

‘You don’t seem to want to fit in here, do you?’

She opened her mouth to say something, closed it again and sighed. ‘I joined Starfleet to get away from the Occupation, to get away from the Cardassians butchering and enslaving my people, but the few missions I’ve been on have been centred on visiting worlds where something similar is going on, albeit on a smaller scale.’

‘That’s what we I do,’ I said to her. ‘We help people turn away from violence. Show them that there is another way.’

‘It doesn’t always work, you should learn that now.’

‘It might not always work, that’s why we have phasers and photon torpedoes.’

‘Well said, crewman,’ a voice bellowed and Ro winced.

‘Commander Mendez, this is Ashley Turner, part of the Corps of Engineers team aboard.’

‘The team you are leading, yes I know,’ Mendez glared. ‘I don’t know how you managed to get that job, nor do I particularly care, but you’d better not pull any stunts.’

‘I will do my job, sir,’ Ro glared back. ‘But understand this; I will not have you bullying my team because you dislike me.’

‘Glad to see you still have your fire. You’ll need it on Garon II. The advanced team have uncovered another ship, this one almost complete.’

‘When is the briefing?’ Ro asked.

‘The Wellington will depart at sixteen hundred hours and the senior officers’ briefing will be held at nineteen hundred. I expect Cavanaugh to give his briefing at twenty-one hundred hours, giving the team two days to get acquainted with all the material.’

‘We’ll be ready.’

‘Of course you will,’ he replied. Turning to me he added, ‘be careful with Ro, she’s slippery.’

‘Aye sir,’ I replied, blushing.

‘If you’ll excuse us, sir,’ Ro grabbed me and pushed me ahead of her. She whispered into my ear, ‘Don’t even think about it, kid.’

I halted in my tracks and she walked into the back of me. I turned round, and brought myself up to my full height. ‘If I want to pursue you, I will. You’re options are to accept or not.’

There was a twinkle in her eyes that I hadn’t noticed before, she was mischievous but guarded. ‘We’ll see.’
 
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Niiiiice.... Don't forget about Ro's history-the first time we saw her she'd been sprung from prison.
 
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