Star Trek Edison Episode One:A Muddled Reawakening

[Bynar0110]

Kudos to the klingon diplomats for being actually more diplomatic than a Star Fleet officer. Commander Zoa-sh was right on the edge of insubordination. Got a Gorn attack coming out of nowhere... I'm sure Star Fleet will be pursuing some context for that. Nice to see the updated K-7. Thanks!! rbs

Had to make the Klarr the voice of reason with the angered Zoa-sh, she's a tellarite. Zoa-sh did callout the nepotism right into the Adm. face. Hope I did Worf and K'Ehleyr characters justice in this chapter.

I'm glad you liked K-7. I made a homage towards the original K-7. Nilz Baris would be happy about Sherman Planet thriving. There's some easter eggs in chapter too.

 

[Will The Serious]

I would like to praise the writing. Your character building is excellent. In just one post, you captured the essence of each character perfectly.

Great scene. Background, diplomacy, military strategy, personal interactions, and an intense enemy attack. Score one for Tribble Station.

-Will

 

[Bynar0110]

I would like to praise the writing. Your character building is excellent. In just one post, you captured the essence of each character perfectly.

Great scene. Background, diplomacy, military strategy, personal interactions, and an intense enemy attack. Score one for Tribble Station.

-Will

Did I get the canon personality of Worf and K'Ehleyr right?

 

[Bynar0110]

An uninterrupted version of my fic can be found at https://www.adastrafanfic.com/works/1574/chapters/3223

 

[BountyTrek]

All ratcheting up nicely. Always reassuring if our hero captain has the respect of the Kiingons.

And after the inevitable Miranda-class death , nice to see one that can hold its own! Nice easter egg-ish ship name as well.

 

[Bynar0110]

All ratcheting up nicely. Always reassuring if our hero captain has the respect of the Kiingons.

And after the inevitable Miranda-class death , nice to see one that can hold its own! Nice easter egg-ish ship name as well.

Klingon's are fun to write. It also fun to show that some Klingons can be calm and wise.
The Gabriel Bell did have backup from the Klingons.

 

[Will The Serious]

Klingon wisdom

Vs Barbarian wisdom.

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-Will