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"Convergence"

Twenty Minutes Until Sinkhole Collapse

In the two minutes since Taurik’s call had come in from Engineering, Madden had had the bridge crew check all systems and confirm readiness. Xharis and Nalan were at Conn and Ops respectively, neither one of them had shown any signs that they couldn’t handle what was about to come, and Madden had no intention of replacing them. Lang stood at her console, monitoring their shields—which were still at ninety-six percent. Watson was at Science, whilst Cadet T’Rees was at Environmental, which had been modified to act as support to Watson. Inaz stayed at Mission Ops, though Stratton had been assigned to impulse control to help Lieutenant Ross. In his place was Lieutenant Deborah Chung, the Beta Shift Watch Officer, whilst her contemporary from Gamma Shift, Lieutenant sh’Thariss, was in auxiliary control with a full crew of her own—just in case anything happened to the bridge.

Everyone had reported in their ready status, and all of them were eager to get back to normal space—their normal space.

“Mr Xharis,” Madden began.

“Moving into optimum position Commander,” the Betazoid cadet finished for him. After a few moments he looked back. “Holding in position now sir.”

Madden nodded and looked at Ops. “Cadet Nalan, are the Bell and Mekong out of the way?”

The J’naii checked the sensors for and nodded. “Yes sir, both ships are five hundred meters behind us. They won’t interfere with the Yosemite.”

“Keep them on that course.” He then turned to the two science cadets. “Are you ready Watson?”

“The resonance pulse has been set to our quantum signature, but I’m ready to fine tune it if needed sir,” she replied, not looking away from her controls.

He glanced over at Chung, who gave him an ‘OK’ hand gesture. He spun back to face the viewscreen and tapped the intraship link. A boatswain’s whistle sounded and he took a deep breathe. “All hands, this is Commander Madden. We are about to execute our escape plan. Secure all non-essential systems and brace yourselves—” he hesitated for a second, thinking he should say something rousing or profound, but nothing came to mind, so he settled for, “Good luck to us all. Madden out.”

With that done he nodded to Chung. “Charge deflector.”

She tapped the control panel. “Deflector charging,” she replied. “Seventy seconds to full power.”

Madden gripped the armrests of his chair tightly, but when he noticed his knuckles turning white he relaxed his grip. Though he was nervous, he shouldn’t broadcast those feelings to his crew—although he was pretty sure that Xharis could feel what he (and no doubt what the rest of the crew) did, the young helmsman was holding together incredibly well.

Chung counted down how long until the deflector was at full power. “Deflector charged,” she announced, her voice wavering slightly.

“Activate deflector dish.”

On the viewscreen, a bright yellow beam of energy—so bright it was almost white—cut through the blue-grey energies that surrounded them. But as soon as the deflector was activated, the ship vibrated again, harder than any of the previous times.

“Gravitational shift sir,” reported T’Rees. “It is ninety percent stronger than previous fluctuations.”

Just then, alarms sounded from Science, Tactical and Operations. Madden looked away from the viewscreen. “Report!” he barked.

“Radiation levels increasing rapidly,” stated Lang. “I’m also reading some kind of magnetic feedback. It is impacting on our shields. They are down to ninety-five percent.”

“Our deflector pulse seems to be having a negative effect on the fissure,” added Nalan. “Its rate of collapse is increasing. Estimate closure of the sinkhole in eight minutes.”

“The shift has knocked the deflector out of alignment,” said Watson, the tension clear in her voice. “I’m going to have to adjust it manually in order to create an opening to our reality.”

“How long?” he asked the scientist.

“It will take a few minutes,” she replied, already working on her calculations and adjustments.

“Shields down to ninety-four percent and continuing to fall. I can’t sure up the energy drop.”

Madden looked up at Lang as the young woman worked furiously to restore their shields. He remained quiet for a few moments, hoping that she would find the problem and stop it. But as she worked, he saw the scowl she wore grow deeper as her attempts to keep the shields up met with no success.

“Damn!” she yelped. Looking up at Madden she told him, “The magnetic feedback is draining our shields. There’s nothing I can do. If we divert more power into them, it will just increase the rate they’re collapsing.”

“How long until they drop to seventy percent?” he asked. If the shields went below that level, they wouldn’t protect the crew from the quantum radiation, and their escape attempt wouldn’t mean a thing.

“At present rate, three-point-seven minutes.”

Madden glanced at Watson, who continued to work quickly. He knew that she was good at what she did, but that was in the classroom, not a life and death situation, where the lives of one hundred and twenty people were on her shoulders. Come on Watson, he mentally encouraged her. He stayed quiet however, not wanting to distract her or have her waste time with explanations or reports.

The Yosemite shuddered harder. Hold together old girl. Just a few minutes and we’ll be back home. Just a little bit longer.

Nalan turned from his console and looked back up Madden. “Sir, rate of collapse has increased again. We have less than four minutes.”

“Shields at ninety percent.”

“Sir,” Chung spoke up. “Deflector power relays are showing signs of overheating. I’d say—” she was cut off when the ship juddered to port. An alarm blared on the Engineering console as the stabilisers levelled the ship. Chung checked her readouts and gasped in horror. “Power conduit seventeen-gamma just breached, deflector output dropping.”

“Commander, we can’t punch through the subspace barrier without the maximum power output of the dish,” Watson added.

He slapped the intercom on his armrest. “Engineering, we need more power to the deflector!”

“The conduit we lost was routing phaser power to the dish. Without it, I cannot re-established a direct energy transfer link,” reported Taurik, who was somehow still managing to sound calm. In that moment, Madden envied his emotional discipline.

“Can’t you take power from anywhere else?”

“Warp power is already diverted to the deflector. We will need all we can in the shields, impulse engines, and structural integrity. I have the emergency batteries ready to generate the static warp bubble. The only available power we have is life-support.”

“Shut it down and divert all you can to the deflector dish!” he ordered. In order to keep the crew alive and comfortable, a substantial amount of energy was used in life-support. But even after it was shut down, a ship the size of the Yosemite would have enough breathable air for several hours. Besides, without the deflector dish, the ship would be crushed in a matter of minutes and life-support wouldn’t be necessary.

“Aye sir. Shutting down life-support and diverting energy.”

Ten seconds later, all the red indicators on Chung’s console turned either green or yellow. “Power levels have risen to just within optimum sir.”

A few moments after she made her report, he heard an excited squeal from Watson. “Quantum signature aligned and locked sir!”

“Sensors show an aperture forming,” T’Rees added.

“Shields at eighty-four percent.”

Madden felt a surge of hope, but quickly clamped down on it. Now was not the time to get sloppy. Just then, the Yosemite lurched again. No alarms sounded, so he breathed a soft sigh of relief. The Oberth-Class might have been small, under powered, minimally armed, and phased out of active service, but the designers had built the ship to handle gravitational wave-fronts and distortion fields in the pursuit of scientific enquiry. She was a tough old crone.

“Size of opening?” he asked after a few seconds. On the viewscreen, he could make out a tiny spot of black against the blue-grey.

“Twenty meters in diameter,” stated Nalan. The Yosemite was forty-one meters high and eighty-seven meters wide. “Sinkhole collapse in two minutes.”

“Shields at seventy-eight percent,” stated Lang, her voice becoming tight.

The shacking was getting worse, and was almost constant. Madden had tightened his grip on the armrest once again, this time he didn’t care if his knuckles were white. This was a tough situation on himself, his ship and his crew, and if he wasn’t nervous now then something would have been very wrong with him. I bet Jean-Luc Picard and Robert DeSoto still get nervous every once in a while!

“Size?”

“Fifty meters.”

“Shields at seventy-five percent.”

“Damn,” he uttered quietly to himself. Sitting back in his seat, he looked at the forward consoles. “Xharis we’ll have to punch our way through—”

“Maximum impulse, aye!” he called back.

Madden turned to Chung. “Activate static warp bubble.”

“Bubble activated,” she replied instantly.

“All hands, brace for impact,” Lang called into the intercom. As soon as the commlink closed, she added, “Shields at seventy-three percent.”

The Yosemite moved towards the black spot, their deflector dish continuing its resonance pulse, slowly expanding the opening—though still no where near large enough for the ship to pass through safely. Madden kept his eyes on the viewscreen, saying a silent prayer to any deity that was listening.

Xharis kept their course straight and true, and in a matter of seconds they ploughed into the too-small opening. The ship slammed forward, throwing Madden and others from their seats. They shook violently. Metal groaned, more klaxons sounded, consoles—vacated when their operators had been thrown to the deck—sparked and blinked off and on as they lost power, the smell of burning metal and plastics filled the bridge (with life-support offline the scrubbers weren’t clearing the smoke or smell from the air).

But then the shaking stopped. The hull grew quiet, no longer under incredible stresses and strain. The klaxons and alarms remained however, as did the thick, foul-smelling air.

As Madden tried to get to his feet, a jolt of pain shot through his body, making him cry out with agony. He clenched his jaw shut and tried to breathe through the pain. Great, something’s broken, he told himself. As he tried once again to get to his feet, Cadet T’Rees helped him carefully. Once standing, the Vulcan ran a tricorder over Madden’s torso, and paused at his left shoulder for a more detailed scan.

“You have dislocated your shoulder Commander. I shall inform sickbay.”

He quickly looked around to see that they were either back at their consoles or dealing with a small fire from the MSD panel at the back of the bridge. They all looked to be in better shape than he was, a few cuts or bruises, but nothing more. “Negative Mr T’Rees. I can live with this for now, let sickbay worry about others first.”

With that he stepped down to forward consoles. Nalan had a shiner of a black eye, but remained at Ops. Xharis had a bloody cut on his right cheek, which he’d wiped at with his sleeve, leaving a deep red stain on the arm of his grey jacket.

“Where are we?”

“Right where we are suppose to be Commander,” Xharis replied. “I’m picking up links from Sector 20 nav-beacons, as well as the signal from out own marker buoy.”

“Damage?”

“Main deflector is completely burned out. We have fires and power outages across the ship, DC teams are on top of them. The damage we originally took to our port nacelle has gotten worse, all of the coils are fused; warp drive is offline. Life-support is still down. There are no hull breaches this time sir.”

“That’s one piece of good news at least. How about subspace communications?”

“The damage from out first crossing is nearly repaired. We should have the comm array back online in less than thirty minutes.”

“It’s top priority Cadet. We’ll be needing a tow to Starbase 170 for full repairs.” He headed up to the upper level, where Chung and Inaz had put out the fire and were checking on the display, and where T’Rees now stood beside Watson at Science. He left Chung and Inaz to their systems checks, and moved to the two science cadets. “Where is the fissure now?”

“It’s just sealed itself Commander. No signs of any shockwaves of subspace disturbances,” Watson told him, sounding relieved.

“What about the original anomaly we picked up?”

“Gone sir—or at least what sensors we have left aren’t picking anything up,” she quickly amended.

Before he could reply, Lang spoke up from Tactical, “Sir.” Her tone was hollow, her expression carefully composed.

He looked back at Watson. “Keep monitoring it,” he ordered then moved to his Tactical Officer. “What is it?” he asked quietly.

“Casualty reports have come in from sickbay. Twenty-seven injured, four serious. Two,” her voice tightened, “dead.”

Madden set his right hand on her console to support himself. The bridge fell quiet, and they all turned to look at Lang and Madden. He could see the worry in their eyes. Looking Lang straight in the eyes, he asked, “Who?”

“Cadets Oliver Wilson and Sandra Collins. Their DC team was stationed in the same section as power conduit seventeen-gamma. They never made it out before the containment bulkheads sealed.”

Closing his eyes, he felt tears well in his eyes, anger in his chest and grief in his heart. They had been his crew. Both of them were senior cadets. Wilson was specialising in structural engineering and starship design, whilst Collins was a pilot, a damn good one going by what he’d seen of her. He fought back his emotional response to punch the closest bulkhead. There would be time to grieve later; they still had a lot to do before then.

“Chung, Inaz, Nalan, T’Rees. Get below and help with repairs. Watson, cover Ops.” As the Chung and the cadets, headed for the turbolift, he moved over to the Engineering console, to get a better look at just how bad the damage was. The numbness he now felt, masked even the pain from his dislocated shoulder. There will be time to grieve later.

***
 
Universe Alpha
2378
Sector 20

Commander’s Log: Stardate 54995.3

After escaping the sinkhole, we managed some crude repairs to our subspace transceiver array and sent out a broadband distress call. The signal was received by the starship Malinche, which is en route to assist and due in eight hours forty-seven minutes. Cadet Watson is continuing to study and analyses the anomaly we first encountered to try and determine if it will pose a navigational hazard for the region. Most of those injured in both our entering and leaving the fissure are recovering is sickbay. Doctor Kalandra informs me that most of them will all be on their feet by the time the Malinche arrives. But our four seriously injured crewmembers will require access to larger medical facilities than we have onboard.

The bodies of Cadets Wilson and Collins have been recovered from the sealed compartment. Cadets Zym and Harper, who were the other half of their DC team, said that when the conduit ruptured they had headed for the safe zone, but Zym had stumbled. Collins went back to help him, but then Wilson told them that the automated safety systems weren’t working due to the overload. Collins pushed Zym and Harper into the safe zone, just as Wilson got activated the manual release, sealing the emergency bulkhead. Lieutenant Taurik informs me that if they hadn’t, we would have lost at least half the deck to the super-heated plasma.

They died saving not only Zym and Harper, but twenty others who were on that deck. I am submitted a posthumous Starfleet Citation for Conspicuous Gallantry, and Starfleet commission of Ensign for both Sandra Collins and Oliver Wilson.

As for our “refugees”, they are helping out wherever they can, but each of them will have to come to terms with the fact that they are in a reality where things are very different to their own universe. I have made our computer records open to them, so that they can read up more on our timeline, or on themselves—although from what we’ve been able to gather so far, almost all of those aboard are no longer living in this reality. Gil Seskal has regained consciousness, but is still under guard. Though I don’t blame her for not wanting to go back to her previous existence, I don’t want her roaming around the ship freely.


For the official record, I am including a full list of the officers and crew we saved, their previous position and posting:
  • Amaro, Crewman Jack – Security Guard, Starbase 170
  • Aster, Lieutenant Marla – Chief Archaeological Officer, U.S.S. Copernicus
  • Boq’ta, Crewman – S.C.E. Power Systems Specialist, U.S.S. T’Pora
  • Branch, Lieutenant Commander Jordan – Commanding Officer, Relay Station Epsilon-9
  • Burke, Lieutenant Maxwell – Chief Tactical Officer, U.S.S. Repulse
  • Carey, Lieutenant Commander Joseph – S.C.E. Second-in-Command, U.S.S. T’Pora
  • Cavit, Captain Jeffery – Commanding Officer, U.S.S. Saratoga-A
  • Ch’Tharn, Commander Akanrathelin – First / Chief Science Officer, U.S.S. Hood
  • Crusher, Captain Jack – Commanding Officer, U.S.S. Picard
  • Cusak, Captain Lisa – Commanding Officer, U.S.S. Olympia
  • Damar, Glinn Corat – Chief Security Officer, U.S.S. Repulse
  • Decker, Captain Willard – Commanding Officer, U.S.S. Enterprise
  • Dern, Lieutenant Anthony – Chief Flight Control Officer, U.S.S. Budapest
  • Durst, Lieutenant Peter – Combat Instructor, Advanced Tactical Training Complex, Jupiter Station
  • Eddington, Commander Michael – First Officer, U.S.S. Defiant
  • Eiger, Lieutenant Junior Grade Inga – Senior Environmental Systems Officer, U.S.S. Enterprise-D
  • Farris, Ensign Karen – Chief Tactical Officer, U.S.S. Lakota
  • Gordon, Ensign Paul – Security Officer, Starbase 170
  • Hawk, Lieutenant Commander Neal – First Officer, U.S.S. Bellerephon
  • Hogan, Ensign Noah – Engineering Officer, U.S.S. Olympia
  • Hoya, Lieutenant Junior Grade – Commanding / Flight Control Officer, U.S.S. Mekong
  • Hudson, Commander Calvin – Commanding Officer, Deep Space 10
  • Idaris, Lieutenant Jadzia – Chief Science Officer, U.S.S. Defiant
  • Ilario, Lieutenant Junior Grade Hector – Assistant Chief Operations Officer, U.S.S. Budapest
  • Ilia, Lieutenant – Chief Navigation Officer, U.S.S. Enterprise
  • Jetal, Ensign Ahni – Operations Officer, U.S.S. Mekong
  • K’Ehleyr – Federation Ambassador, Qo’NoS
  • Kaplan, Crewman Marie – Security Guard, U.S.S. Repulse
  • Kellin, Crewman – S.C.E. Communications / Computer Systems Specialist, U.S.S. T’Pora
  • Kes, Lieutenant Junior Grade – Chief Medical Officer, U.S.S. Yeager
  • Kwan, Lieutenant Daniel – Chief Engineering Officer, U.S.S. Repulse
  • La Forge, Captain Silva – Commanding Officer, U.S.S. Hera
  • Lal, Lieutenant Junior Grade – Chief Science Officer, U.S.S. Picard
  • Larkin, Lieutenant Commander Nadia – First Officer, U.S.S. Repulse
  • McGarry, Lieutenant Commander Lucas – Chief Medical Officer, U.S.S. Saratoga-A
  • Muniz, Crewman Enrique – Engineer, U.S.S. Repulse
  • Pechetti, Crewman Michael – Engineer, U.S.S. Mekong
  • Porter, Lieutenant Paul – Assistant Chief Engineering Officer, U.S.S. Enterprise-D
  • Rice, Captain Paul – Commanding Officer, U.S.S. Lakota
  • Seskal, Gil Ilani – Operations Officer, U.S.S. Repulse
  • Shepard, Ensign Riley – Security Officer, U.S.S. Hera
  • Sonak, Commander – First / Chief Science Officer, U.S.S. Enterprise
  • Stadi, Lieutenant Commander Aiva – First Officer, U.S.S. Saratoga-A
  • Stolzoff, Crewman Rachel – Security Guard, Starbase 170
  • Suder, Chief Petty Officer Lon – Damage Control Supervisor, U.S.S. Repulse
  • T’Lor, Crewman – Mineralogist, U.S.S. Tian An Men
  • Tora Ziyal – Teaching Assistant, U.S.S. Repulse
  • Vargas, Crewman Diego – Security Guard, U.S.S. Repulse
  • Watters, Ensign Timothy – Chief Flight Control Officer, U.S.S. Lakota
  • Yar, Lieutenant Commander Natasha – Chief Security / Tactical Officer, U.S.S. Enterprise-D
I passed the ship’s logs to the Malinche, who in turn forwarded them on to Starfleet Command. So by the time we reach Starbase 170 there should be specialists waiting to help these people.


I would also like to add that the cadet crew preformed admirably in the situation, above and beyond all expectations. Though they too, must not face the loss of colleagues and friends. Once we get to Starbase 170, we will hold a shipboard memorial for Collins and Wilson.

End log.

***
 
With the Malinche less than an hour away, and the crew conducting what repairs they could, Martin Madden sat in his ready room staring out the window. The Yosemite was all but adrift in space. Her warp drive, navigational deflector dish, and weapons all completely useless. Her impulse drive had somehow come through the ordeal in near perfect working order, and life-support had once again been restored.

He had finally gone to sickbay to get his shoulder seen to, and was treated by one of the survivors from the Mekong, an elfin young woman, with kind blue eyes and long golden hair that fell around her shoulders. She had treated him with a gentle touch, and offered him words of comfort at the loss of Collins and Wilson.

Though his shoulder was back in its socket, the muscles and tendons would be tender for a few days and so he wore a sling. He would live with the discomfort.

The door chimed. He turned to face it and called, “Come in.”

Parting, the doors revealed Emily Watson. Behind her he could see the bridge, which had become a quiet and subdued place since the loss of two of their own. She stepped inside and the doors closed behind her.

“I’ve completed my preliminary analysis sir,” she told him, clutching a PADD. He motioned for her to come forward and take a seat. She did so, handing him the PADD as she sat down. He quickly glanced over the complex sequences of data and telemetry. Though he would read it in detail, he wanted a straightforward answer and set the PADD on his desktop.

“What would be your theory?” he asked.

“I think, the initial anomaly we came across was some kind of,” she paused, looking like she was racking her brain for some way to put what she wanted to say, but after a second or two she shrugged her shoulders and continued, “dimensional fault line.”

“‘Fault line’?”

“Yes sir. The same way that two tectonic plates have a fault line where they meet, I believe that this is something similar, but on a cosmic scale. We found the fault buried deep down in subspace, then I began the tetryon pulse and quantum resonance scans. At that exact same point the Mekong, Alexander Graham Bell and Hawkeye were travelling at those coordinates in each of their universes. The existence of the fault line, combined with three distinct warp signatures and our deep scans caused it to shift momentarily, and that shift caused the subspace fissure we became trapped in.”

Madden thought over her theory for a moment. Granted, he was a theoretical physicist, but what she was saying sounded plausible to him—and she was a theoretical physicist. He looked at the PADD on his desk again, and all the statistics and data she had amassed in such a short space of time. He knew that this research would get her name into pretty much every scientific journal in the Federation.

“Will this fault line cause navigational problems in this sector?”

She shook her head. “I don’t believe so Commander. What scans I’ve been able to run show no sign of the original readings that drew us here to begin with. This instability would have been growing since time began sir. Only now did it become something our sensors could detect. I doubt there would be another occurrence for several eons.”

“What about aftershocks?”

“There may be some subspace fluctuations, we should warn all ships in the sector to be careful.” She paused again, looking about ready to add something else but seemed unsure.

He studied her intently for a moment and then asked, “Anything else Cadet?”

“It’s just that, I doubt this is the only place where these dimensional fault lines exist. There could be dozens more in the quadrant. Unfortunately I have no real proof to back that up, or any way to predict where they might be.”

He gave her a sad smile. “Well we now know what to look for, and I imagine Starfleet Science will spend a great deal of time trying to find other Watson Fissures to study.”

“Sir?”

“What? You don’t want to be forever in the history books?”

She smiled, blushed and looked away from him for a moment. “Well, maybe sir. But could you not have thought of a better name for them?”

“I’ll leave that up to you then Cadet.” He gestured to the PADD. “Excellent work Ms Watson.”

“Thank you, sir.”

“Dismissed.” Watson headed out of the ready room.

Just after she left the intercom chirped. “Lang to Madden. The Malinche will be along side in twenty minutes.”

“Thank you Lieutenant, I’m on my way.”

Madden picked up the PADD and looked over the data for a brief second. Whichever Captain gets her aboard their ship is going to be damned lucky, he told himself. He’d been lucky to have her with him on this brief training mission. He rose from his seat, winced slightly due to his shoulder, and headed out onto the bridge. They had been one helluva good crew, a testament to their uniforms and a brave new generation of officers to continue Starfleet’s mission.
 
The End!

It was longer than I had intended, but it got the job done. There will be another couple of stories on the back of this one, with established characters and what they are up to now.

As always any and all comments are welcome, either here on the boards or privately.

Be on the look out for the second installment in this little series of mine: "Lost And Found".

-Bry
 
Great story! I loved how you built up to the climatic scene. It seems that Seskal is a snake, regardless of the universe. The rest of the crew performed bravely in a hair-raising sequence. I'm glad they made it home, but it cost them plenty. Now I wonder how these refugees will adapt to their new universe, particularly Decker and Ilia who are also a century behind the times.

You created some memorable characters along with a dynamic plot. Kudos for an exciting and entertaining story! :techman:
 
Great story! I loved how you built up to the climatic scene. It seems that Seskal is a snake, regardless of the universe. The rest of the crew performed bravely in a hair-raising sequence. I'm glad they made it home, but it cost them plenty. Now I wonder how these refugees will adapt to their new universe, particularly Decker and Ilia who are also a century behind the times.

You created some memorable characters along with a dynamic plot. Kudos for an exciting and entertaining story! :techman:

Aww shucks!

Thanks TLR!
 
That was a very well-rounded and well thought out story. I enjoyed it a lot. I'd love to see follow-up for some of the castaways and how they adjust(or don't ) to their new homes.
 
Great story! I can't wait for the sequel. You had great characters. An excellent storyline... Need I say more? It was awesome!
 
Thanks for the feedback.

This is the first of three short-ish stories, which may evolve into something more (not sure yet), and are all based on the "where-are-they-now?" mentallity. "Lost & Found" may not seem to tie in directly, but it will do in the grand scheme that I have going in my head. It will be the third installment where I will work on the castaways, so be sure to look out for "Strangers In A Strange Land" after I've finished "L&F".

-Bry
 
A terrific story with a lot of characters and detail in so compact a tale. A fantastic performance by Madden and his crew of instructors and cadets, as well as some hard choices to be made by those people from the alternate dimensions.

I liked Madden's reaction to the deaths of two of his cadets, but he had the presence of mind to push that grief into the background long enough to accomplish the 'mission' before allowing himself to mourn those losses.

I especially enjoyed the presence of so many 'alternates' from the various divergent realities making cameos in the story.

Again, great work! :techman:
 
A terrific story with a lot of characters and detail in so compact a tale. A fantastic performance by Madden and his crew of instructors and cadets, as well as some hard choices to be made by those people from the alternate dimensions.

I liked Madden's reaction to the deaths of two of his cadets, but he had the presence of mind to push that grief into the background long enough to accomplish the 'mission' before allowing himself to mourn those losses.

I especially enjoyed the presence of so many 'alternates' from the various divergent realities making cameos in the story.

Again, great work! :techman:

Glad you (and everyone else) enjoyed it. It was a hoot to write, starting off with the basic idea of "I want to bring back some of those characters that were killed off instead of being developed" and going from them.

Once I get "Strangers" written, anyone who wanted to use any of the characters brough back from the grave, would be more than welcome too, seeing as how I'm not going to be able to work out how all 50 of them (plus a few other guest stars) deal with their new situation without writing a full blown novel.

-Bry
 
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