One further question: to your knowledge, did Jeffries' revised plans of 7 Nov 1964 state the ship's size, or cite a scale?
No, that information wasn't needed for the model makers. The only thing they needed was the finished plans... and they were already late (Datin was forced to start the 33 inch model with previous plans). Further, there were no copies of the final plans made. The only copy went to Datin and stayed with him.
The next time Jefferies was asked to draw the Enterprise was for the AMT model kit. My studies of that kit show that Jefferies was most likely working from notes he retained from the original plans (and many of the measurements are nearly identical while others are slightly off and some shapes are also different).
The next time he drew the Enterprise after that was for the drawings with the "real world" measurement applied to them. Again, those measurements match up with those of the original plans, but the shapes are off.
A decent set of plans of the 11 foot model wouldn't exist again until the mid 1990s.
So... what was your point in asking?
I point out that in the illustration you include above, the photo's "flight hatch" width exceeds that of your diagram...although the shuttlecraft widths are the same. Is there a reason for this discrepancy apart from holding to a 947 length?
Well, first, I don't consider the hangar deck model to be usable at all (other than for some details). The problem is that it is a forced perspective miniature and we have no way of knowing at which spot (if any) the shuttlecraft would have been in the right scale (or if there was even any spot that was at the right scale). The hangar miniature was design to invoke a feeling of a large space... how do you measure a feeling?
The photo was included to show that it was pretty close using
Warped9's shuttlecraft... which I was quite happy with. It most likely would have been even better if I had used the 20 foot shuttlecraft exterior prop instead, but I like
Warped9's shuttlecraft as a good compromise.
But lets get back to history (as the behind the scenes stuff is what I'm interested in and was the part of your original question I answered). Jefferies was pulled out of the loop on the shuttlecraft. The basic design was done by Thomas Kellogg and commissioned by AMT (who was paying for everything). And all this was put together under the pressure of the first season... where they were constantly behind schedule. So if the interior doesn't match the exterior which doesn't match the model which is misproportioned to the hangar miniature which wasn't meant as a scale reference anyways as it was designed as a forced perspective... then maybe it is a bad place to look for anything that works with anything.
And it only shows up in a few episodes (compared to the Enterprise which appears in all of them).
I understand that you've invested a lot in the shuttlecraft... but it simply isn't a good gauge for the scale of anything (even itself). And it doesn't change the fact that the size of the Enterprise had been worked out years earlier.
All such ideas have met with universal (and oftimes rather Rube Goldbergian, if not specious) dismissal here...rather an oddity to my eyes, given what I've long observed as the BBS members' willingness to discuss to death such minutia as registry numbers.
I'm not part of that... as far as I'm concerned, there were only three numbers associated with three ship names throughout all of TOS (Enterprise, NCC-1701, Republic, NCC-1371, and Constellation, NCC-1017).
What should allow you to "take me seriously" is the content of my arguments.
Not when on one hand you dismiss one thing for reasons that could have been applied to things that you hold strongly. There wasn't a scale measurement next to the shuttlecraft or the hangar deck miniature on screen, so why give those elements weight and not something that does have a scale measurement included?
If you showed consistency in your arguments, I'd take you more seriously. As it is, you don't seem interested in what is now known... you seem to just want to perpetuate what you've believed for years.
If you want to have
canon arguments about such things, great. Find someone who cares. I'm interested in the history of the production, and I answered your production question.
Your conclusions are, to my mind, in some cases another matter.
More often than not, I don't share anything that is a matter of my opinion. Years from now, people will know a lot about these things and the people who made it happen... and my name will be forgotten. And rightfully so, as none of it is mine anyways.
When I put forward what Jefferies did, it isn't really a matter of debate... as to what people accept as
canon, well to each their own. I have some ideas about things, but I work hard not to mix it in with research.
And as a researcher... the shuttlecraft interior is a different animal from the exterior, which in turn is a different animal from the model. As a researcher, I don't need them to work together... I need them only to be what they were. That is how you avoid compromises.
One thing I am proud of is that people who I don't agree with on things still use and reference my research because they know it is unbias.
I do not, however, take either as any sort of final authority. The source matter is that. What form that source matter (the show itself) would have taken, could have taken, should have taken, or was meant to have taken by ONE of its creators is irrelevant.
This is why I've avoided the
canon stuff. I don't care about interpretation... everyone's is going to be different. My focus is on the people behind the show, the designers, the models, the sets, and the events (and interactions) which shaped them.
You seem to have an agenda in this. I'm only curious as to what actually happened and why.
But I have never presented myself as an authority. I've presented my work, and people are free to judge for themselves.
I began with the question, "when was the size nailed." I think the honest answer is, "it depends on what one means by 'nailed,' and by who." This thread includes a citation of the content and date of a memo by Roddenberry suggesting he, at least, was ignorant of 947 loa well subsequent to the date of Jeffries' construction plans.
Actually, it suggests that Roddenberry didn't have a head for scale.
One of the first things you need to realize is that a lot of people have no sense of scale and no aptitude for numbers. For people like this,
big is a gray area. And it doesn't take much to figure out who didn't grasp these types of things very well.
So the first question is, why give anyone like that (even Roddenberry) any amount of weight on this issue? Easy answer... you shouldn't.
The only thing worse than people who don't grasp scale (which isn't really their fault) are people who repeat bad information mindlessly.
The hangar deck was likewise built afterwards. The INTENT of my question was, if the size was nailed prior to the deck's construction, why does the deck look so damn big?
It was intended to feel big... feel, but not to be measured. After all, it was a miniature trying to feel big... and it worked. But it wasn't
intended to be a gauge by which everything else was to be measured (as it wasn't supposed to be measurable on screen anyways).
So the problem here is that you've applied a massive amount of personal investment into something that wasn't intended to be used that way.
Clearly a number of unanswerable (what with Datin's death) questions would follow. Did Datin work from plans?
Of course he did. And they were drawn by Jefferies, and they were intended to off set limitations of 1960 cameras.
Did their "first draft" (fittable into a 947 ship, which is to say, of a like size to ST V's) get a rejection from higher up? ("Make it bigger!").
First, STV's hangar is misshaped, and doesn't fit the model. It is less accurate than the TOS version. Second, as I said before, there were limitations to how cameras back then could capture miniatures. These men were professionals and knew the tricks of the trade. There is a reason why the 11 foot model is that big... it was needed so it would work on camera.
Today, we could do everything in scale and make it look big. Heck, by 1979 a smaller model of the Enterprise looked great when projected from 70 mm film onto massive screens.
And by the way, fitting cabins for all into 3 decks MAY not jibe with Making's what's-on-each-deck descriptions, depending on how one reads them. Not to mention the matter of guest quarters. But that doesn't really matter, does it? The size having been "nailed" in '64, and all.
Who said
all? I just alluded to three decks that I had worked on... you seem to want to distort that. This is why it is hard to take you seriously.
And considering the number of errors in TMoST, yeah, it can be disregarded. Just like we can disregard TMoST when it said that the 11 foot model was 14 feet long.
TMoST was rushed to publication with no one double checking it. It contains a ton of information about TOS that we know today to be wrong. And one shouldn't read it without being highly critical of what you find in there... specially things written by the author that he wasn't involved with (which was a lot). It has some nice raw data, but a lot should just be ignored.
And yeah, the size was nailed in 1964... even if it runs contrary to your agenda in these threads. You can have opinions on if it worked (I think it does), but the facts are the facts. You asked...
Has anyone knowledge of exactly when in TOS production history the ship's size was nailed?
Answer: November 7, 1964
I'm probably the only person in the whole thread who doesn't care about the size of the ship.
Well, you may be in the minority in this thread, but your in the majority among Trek fans.