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Moby's the Machine's name, Dickens be thy Doomsday game

Qonundrum

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So "The Doomsday Machine", a story whose plot beats would return for other staples such as "The Immunity Syndrome"...

For a show involving seeking out and making peace with other life forms, or if nothing else getting jiggy with them, season 2 is starting to ratchet up a few "Don't ask what it is, just blow it up" routines. Usually for good reason, this machine has no accessible off switch and is destroying billions and imagine if the Amoeba critter evolved into something like a human, only far far larger... just imagine the personals ad profile complete with pictures...

...:rommie:

So anyhoo, I watched the TOS-R edition with the new effects, then looked back at the originals. The originals work, but this episode is definitely an example of how the new effects also are more than the sum of their parts and is the version I'd recommend people try at least once because they really add to the sense of scale and scope. They're still breathtaking despite their age thanks to the content within. Other episodes, yeah, I do return to the originals - especially "The Immunity Syndrome", but not this one.

Scott says "lads" in this one. Later, he forgets his accent, but for every time he says "lass", remember he does say "lads".

William Windom -- I don't remember the article in which he felt like he gave the wrong performance but, dang, he's better than perfect in this one, managing to sell so much "tell vs show" attributes and getting the audience to empathize and imagine 400 crewmembers on their communicators begging for him to beam them back. That's HUGE.

Yeah. the story is a partial retelling of "Moby Dick" - swap the big whale with a gigantic windsock that eats planet rocks and rubble as sources of energy and, voila. Except the whale has emotions, even if not of the sentient/conscious sort. The machine just machines around. At least Spock tries to think of what this thing was used for, which leads us to...

*drumroll* The topical tie-in o' the week, circa 'sixty seven.

Yup. The H-bomb. The story keeps the tie-in minimal, and proceeds to make a story based on this device and some what-ifisms and is far eminently creative.

Also, the usual dialogue of "will go through the most densely populated portion of our galaxy" is used as plot crutch, complete with sock itch. Given the fact of the increasing density of planetary systems as one goes deeper into the galaxy, the outermost diameter/rim is where life as we know it is most likely going to develop, unless - out there, somewhere, cue the music - some species can evolve on a densely-gravity planet that has a thin atmosphere that can manage to survive being bombarded by bits of asteroids and debris on a regular basis. Life can be inorganic...

Okay, so if the machine reacts to the power nacelles, why not just turn them off and then rescue everyone, then turn them back on and then hightail it out of there in the opposite direction? Space is like three dimensions and sorta big and stuff... ...but then there'd be no story, and what is shown on screen and told are highly compelling. Didn't feel sluggish in the way many 60s shows do nowadays.

The chain of command scenes between Decker and Spock are must-sees. Indeed, Decker's insignia is almost a visual representation of the attitude he's putting out. Definitely with the suffix "-ish" at the end.

As are the Spock/McCoy ones. "In plain, non-Vulcan English, we've been lucky" is one of so many little moments peppered in. The story's writing really knows when to ratchet things up, when to relax, when to add in banter that flows ever so smoothly with the story narrative. It's a masterpiece.

Did I mention the great lighting and camerawork? Iconic. Even the lighting that is backlit and reveals characters' fuzzy earhair that would have been impossible to have seen in non-blu-ray releases. That's not a bad thing, it happens folks.

The music too fits beautifully.

Gotta love it when Scotty whips out a big engineering tool that makes its own constant hum-um-whoosh-um-um-um-um noise!

Washburn... Washburn... no, my sideburns aren't dirty, but a fan of many NBC shows at the time may have mixed up engineer Washburn with DW Washburn that the Monkees belted out several months later as their tv show had ended its run before then.

As always, Spock is the unsung standout with his detached demeanor, even if Decker is trying his patience.

While Spock and McCoy banter about Decker's being unfit for command, you-guessed-it in red in the background makes sure to be seen. Love this guy!! :luvlove:

As Enterprise gets attacked, how come Spock spouts the latest statistics to Decker so fast when he's not directly at a console? He dons an earpiece but how fast is the person (or even computer) on the other end relaying casualties, if not the computer... the latency lag time seems a tad off no matter how you look at it. Also consider, earlier in the episode, there is no audible or visual cue for when the Machine snaps on a tractor beam, so how does Spock know so quick? (Doesn't really need to anyway, and the new visuals of Enterprise looking helpless really sweeten the pot.)

Stunt doubles!! Good ones are picked this time! They're even hairstyled to match! The camera intercuts are so fast that it's A+++ by TOS standards that they're not as easy to spot as usual! Again, blu-ray on a 65" screen in 2024 vs SD on a 25" screen in 1968 makes for a fun comparison...

Kirk imploring Decker how he's a valuable commodity and they're stronger with him, and not to feel guilt over an error in command judgment, is a huge key moment.

Along with other humorous styles, Kirk gets all gallows in the end with the "Gentlemen, I suggest you beam me aboard!" I'll admit, we know he's going to survive, but the handling of the transporter going pew-pew-boom is well-executed.

Spock does ask if more of these things are in the galaxy. So, next week, they don't encounter a dozen of them. Dang.

Easily a 10/10 story. One of, if not the finest of TOS's run.
 
. . . The chain of command scenes between Decker and Spock are must-sees. Indeed, Decker's insignia is almost a visual representation of the attitude he's putting out. Definitely with the suffix "-ish" at the end.
He's being pretzelish??

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He's being pretzelish??

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LOL! Not quite, but flip the image horizontally and think of any number of handfuls of "Family Guy" jokes, and voila... but he did twist logic into a pretzel to go after his big Moby, that's for sure... still haven't found the William Windom interview, it's his performance that the whole episode revolves around and he's nothing less than magnificent.

Also, I forgot how "Obsession" is another season 2 episode that also has the Moby-D plot going on as well, only this time it's Kirk out to kill the gassy whale. Granted, season 1 had glowing balls of light as life forms that could manipulate everything around them and made Charie, Trelane, Metrons, Organians, probably Shore Leave's builders because they could conjure stuff up as well, et, etc... yet rarely did they scream "Oi, that one's just like the other!" (Barring a couple instances, but they're all largely entertaining regardless of reused/altered plot tropes...)
 
Yeah. the story is a partial retelling of "Moby Dick"

As are the Spock/McCoy ones. "In plain, non-Vulcan English, we've been lucky" is one of so many little moments peppered in.

Washburn... Washburn... no, my sideburns aren't dirty, but a fan of many NBC shows at the time may have mixed up engineer Washburn with DW Washburn that the Monkees belted out several months later as their tv show had ended its run before then.
Besides MOBY, there's also an in-joke CAINE MUTINY moment. With Decker, the steel balls are now credit cards from the look of them.

When Decker tells McCoy to leaves the bridge, he leaves the rest of the episode. Sulking in Sickbay, apparently.

The actor who plays Washburn----unless I'm mixing him up in a different way----was Veronica Cartwright's husband in reality. That technically would make him Penny Robinson's brother-in-law as well.
 
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Besides MOBY, there's also an in-joke CAINE MUTINY moment. With Decker, the steel balls are now credit cards from the look of them.

When Decker tells McCoy to leaves the bridge, he leaves the rest of the episode. Sulking in Sickbay, apparently.

The actor who plays Washburn----unless I'm mixing him up in a different way----was Veronica Cartwright's husband in reality. That technically would make him Penny Robinson's brother-in-law as well.

ARRGHHH! Nice catch!! I saw that movie in high school, a week or two after "Charly". I should have noticed the steel ball/command tapes were paralleled. :brickwall: But that's just how awesome this story is; references exist but when you don't pick up on them, that's top-notch. It'd be bad to notice and then be taken out of the story. Especially when I've seen the Red Dwarf episode "Rimmerworld" where Rimmer grinds the 4cm diameter steel balls into 1cm ones a few dozen times and knew right off the bat they were taking cue from "Caine" (which fits Rimmer perfectly).


Still, every time I munch on a Bugle, I think of the planet-killer.

Same here. I've since found it cheaper just to dip a saltine cracker in some heated-up coconut oil, or just spoon the oil directly. I'm getting my cholesterol levels checked next week and it's probably at 6060-842 by now... well, 5218 or otherwise, that's also another easter egg of sorts.

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I bet the person who had 8675309 called her up... :devil:
 
This is my all time favorite Star Trek story franchise wise. Nothing will ever top it. I am staunchly devoted to the original effects.

So anyhoo, I watched the TOS-R edition with the new effects, then looked back at the originals. The originals work, but this episode is definitely an example of how the new effects also are more than the sum of their parts and is the version I'd recommend people try at least once because they really add to the sense of scale and scope. They're still breathtaking despite their age thanks to the content within. Other episodes, yeah, I do return to the originals - especially "The Immunity Syndrome", but not this one.
There is only one episode I always go to the TOS-R effects for and it's "Tomorrow is Yesterday" because those effects (whether or not they are 100% successful), actually make sense of the slingshot maneuver. And the Enterprise in the sky footage is to die for.

But "The Doomsday Machine" misses the mark in some very important areas (as far as I'm concerned anyways). The CGI artists didn't pay close enough attention to the dialog and delivery when they made some of them.

At no point did the Enterprise have time to actually put a tractor beam on the Constellation (Kirk never gave Spock the order), and the Enterprise attempting evasive maneuvers while towing the sister ship is awkward to do at best. The original feeling was that Spock moved the Enterprise away from the Constellation to draw the machine from them. Yet in TOS-R, when the planet killer fires on them, we see the Constellation and the Enterprise pushed away from each other.

Second, the aux control viewscreen is finally repaired. We see Kirk "try it now." Camera on Kirk:

"Yes I think....what the devil's going on?!"
The original version shows a totally activated view screen and the Enterprise approaching the PK. Not firing, just approaching. So yeah, "the screen works and why is the Enterprise approaching this thing head on?"

TOS-R:

"Yes I think....what the devil's going on?!"

Cut to the viewscreen - STILL STATIC FILLED for a second and then it clears to show the Enterprise firing. Not only did Kirk NOT see what was happening (so there's nothing to react to yet), the ship is OBVIOUSLY firing.

And then we cut to Decker yelling "fire!" in a manner that suggests it's the FIRST order to fire (and he does this while the ship is seen still firing). Not third. The dramatic line reading speaks volumes.

Third:

We see the (got it, they're awful) cartoon phaser beams hitting the PK hull, with the energy dancing off the surface.

Sulu: "They just....bounced off." Yep, they sure did.

TOS-R: the (I admit improved) beams are ABSORBED into the skin of the PK. No dancing or bouncing. And Sulu's reaction is one of surprise that would have been stated sooner, after the first volley, not the (by this time) sixth.

Fourth:

Decker: "Did it! Hard about, give me some distance!"

Original: cut to a sped up stock shot of the Enterprise veering off. It's old, creaky but has speed and energy.

TOS-R: new shot of the Enterprise sloooooooowly turning. Realistic? Sure. Better effect? I guess so. Zero energy? Absolutely.

Things I did like:

The space debris and the small bit hitting the Constellation's saucer.
I actually felt the strafing run was exciting.
All of the shuttlecraft footage.
The Constellation struggling to stay on course into the maw of the machine was sweet. The finale was very well done. Actually, everything other than the stuff I mentioned. I would have preferred they stuck closer to the original design of the PK, but it's not too far afield.
 
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This is my all time favorite Star Trek story franchise wise. Nothing will ever top it. I am staunchly devoted to the original effects.


There is only one episode I always go to the TOS-R effects for and it's "Tomorrow is Yesterday" because those effects (whether or not they are 100% successful), actually make sense of the slingshot maneuver. And the Enterprise in the sky footage is to die for.

But "The Doomsday Machine" misses the mark in some very important areas (as far as I'm concerned anyways). The CGI artists didn't pay close enough attention to the dialog and delivery when they made some of them.

At no point did the Enterprise have time to actually put a tractor beam on the Constellation (Kirk never gave Spock the order), and the Enterprise attempting evasive maneuvers while towing the sister ship is awkward to do at best. The original feeling was that Spock moved the Enterprise away from the Constellation to draw the machine from them. Yet in TOS-R, when the planet killer fires on them, we see the Constellation and the Enterprise pushed away from each other.

Second, the aux control viewscreen is finally repaired. We see Kirk "try it now." Camera on Kirk:

"Yes I think....what the devil's going on?!"
The original version shows a totally activated view screen and the Enterprise approaching the PK. Not firing, just approaching. So yeah, "the screen works and why is the Enterprise approaching this thing head on?"

TOS-R:

"Yes I think....what the devil's going on?!"

Cut to the viewscreen - STILL STATIC FILLED for a second and then it clears to show the Enterprise firing. Not only did Kirk NOT see what was happening (so there's nothing to react to yet), the ship is OBVIOUSLY firing.

And then we cut to Decker yelling "fire!" in a manner that suggests it's the FIRST order to fire (and he does this while the ship is seen still firing). Not third. The dramatic line reading speaks volumes.

Third:

We see the (got it, they're awful) cartoon phaser beams hitting the PK hull, with the energy dancing off the surface.

Sulu: "They just....bounced off." Yep, they sure did.

TOS-R: the (I admit improved) beams are ABSORBED into the skin of the PK. No dancing or bouncing. And Sulu's reaction is one of surprise that would have been stated sooner, after the first volley, not the (by this time) sixth.

Fourth:

Decker: "Did it! Hard about, give me some distance!"

Original: cut to a sped up stock shot of the Enterprise veering off. It's old, creaky but has speed and energy.

TOS-R: new shot of the Enterprise sloooooooowly turning. Realistic? Sure. Better effect? I guess so. Zero energy? Absolutely.

Things I did like:

The space debris and the small bit hitting the Constellation's saucer.
I actually felt the strafing run was exciting.
All of the shuttlecraft footage.
The Constellation struggling to stay on course into the maw of the machine was sweet. The finale was very well done. Actually, everything other than the stuff I mentioned. I would have preferred they stuck closer to the original design of the PK, but it's not too far afield.

Terrific analysis. I like both sets of effects, but I think that this is TOS-R's finest hour. Just being able to see the interior of the destroyed Constellation saucer in the first few minutes had me in stunned disbelief and awe. The debris hit that you mentioned is a great touch. I like the strafing run as well; if you show me the Enterprise moving like a ship from that other franchise (to be clear, it's Star Trek that I take to the proverbial desert island over the unnamed alternative, and it's not even close), I'm guaranteed to be hooked.

This is also my favorite episode in TOS and all of Trekdom. My second and third favorites (Wolf in the Fold and Wink of an Eye) are less often so beloved by others, but on this one I find a lot of folks like yourself in agreement. Again, nice post. Thanks.
 
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