Star Trek (2009) Line-by-Line Version 2.0

Discussion in 'Star Trek Movies: Kelvin Universe' started by CoveTom, Dec 19, 2009.

  1. CoveTom

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    Greetings, folks!

    By popular demand, I've been asked to start a new line-by-line thread to go through the movie once again, in the hopes of allowing even more people to participate!

    Once we've gone through the movie once more, perhaps we'll be ready to start the fake line-by-line thread on Star Trek XII!

    For any unfamiliar with our "game," you are asked to post only a single line (defined as one character speaking without interruption by another character) per message. You can post as often as you like, but someone else must post a line in between your posts. We don't include alot of "stage directions" and so forth, but do generally try to note when a scene changes from one location to another.

    Enjoy!
     
  2. CoveTom

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    COM VOICE: U.S.S. Kelvin, go for Starfleet base.
     
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  9. Yeoman Randi

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  10. leandar

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  11. GhostFaceSaint

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  12. Wynterhawk

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    Officer: Repeat. Could this be Klingon?
     
  13. Yeoman Randi

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  19. Wynterhawk

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